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hahahaha Snape thinking is his fault because his intructions were not precise is priceless.

Hilarious!!!
[Q]Severus heaved them apart again with all his strength, and raised his voice to his most commanding. "Absolutely not." He growled, "most *certainly*, NOT!"
It was Harry, trained for seven years to obey that voice, who fell back, shook his head and let out a noise of great, aching disappointment.[Q] That was just too funny:):):):):) Update!!!

yay! moreLucius/Harry time!

That was very interesting....VERY!!!! Hope to see more soon! You kinky author you!

A ball of wriggling, tangled, unending ball of sweaty male flesh.
Oo.

Motherhood, and apparently and duo of very hot, very protective, were-leopards, are apparently very good for Draco. It's nice to see he has some one, or rather, some two, who love him, and whom he can love in return. It brings out his softer side. And on that note, I can't wait to see what a lycan wedding will be like. I'm sure, since it is for Harry and Lucius, a chosen and his king, that it will be suitibly romantic, enchanting, and poinant, with just that little bit of class and schmaltz thrown in. Very, very good, dear one. Until next time....

*claps* i loved this chapter!

Pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, pant, and PANT!!!!!!

I don't remember reading such a hot set of scenes outside of . . . I don't know. It may be winter outside, but I need a fan RIGHT NOW!!!

thats was incredible !!! you got me ll hot and bothered now and feeling oh so horny !!! damn it !!! your amazing that was an amazing sex scene !!! i want more so baddly !!!

I was very excited when I found you were posting this here. I originally read it on KnockturnAlley, many, many moons ago, but that site went down for some reason. Then I found it on the Beloved Enemies yahoo group, but the chapters were not many. So I was quite sad that I couldn't read any further of this delectable story. But, I don't need to worry about that any longer, for you have posted here. I love this story, the characterizations, the situations, the whole idea. I especially love your OC's. They're believable without seeming Mary Sue/Gary Stu--ish. They add to the story, but don't detract from the plot or from canon characters. That is a difficult feat to accomplish, yet you have done so admirably.

I love the dynamics of Lucius and Harry's relationship. Harry is obviouslly submissive without losing himself, or his sense of power over others. He is still Harry Potter, still the one who defeated Voldemort, but he doesn't have the burdons he did. It's nice for him to give control to someone else for a change. I also Love the dynamics of Harry's relationship with Graeme, and with Lucius added as King, it makes for delicious showing and accepting of power.

You've created a beautiful and believable world and I cannot wait to see where else you take it. I have more to comment on, but the specifics elude me right now. Just know that I anxiously await your every update and I stand, (or rather, sit) in awe of your story telling ability.