rate_review Reviews

This is a very interesting story so far... the only thing i have criticism for is the part where you describe the mysterious female who turns into Lucius as he/she, her/him, etc. I understand what you are trying to get across, that even though the person looks like Lucius, a male, it is a woman as well. I would try to find another way of describing this... as it detracts from the main theme of the chapter. However, other than that, i am eager to continue the story!

I love this story!

I do have to say the story was great and very deep, but the only thing that really bothered me the most about it, is that you kind of undermined (Harry and Lucius)relationship. every story line seem to be more focused on (Draco and severus) love and sexual scenes. it really made me upset that all the good and happy moments were all for draco and severus. i really wish you could've steered the story, were it was harry all along to be the destined one to get pregnant ( naturally of course) with the first heir that belonged to lucius and no one else. It's just that i expected more out this beautiful love story.....but other than that i really enjoyed reading it. I really would like more stories about harry and severus, maybe about vampires...i alway's thought sev as a bloodsucker who craves only harry as a mate is very erotic and sexy!!. please email me any sites or stories if you can, you really are a superb writer and would love to read more from you. thankyou, rosie (rfelicie@yahoo.com)

This story is amazing. I know that you wrote it awhile ago, but it is still amazing. I only found it about 3 days ago and read through the whole thing. Look forward to reading some of your other work too.

i fianlly finished it!! and LOVED it :D you write beautifully and i have to admit that was the longest story i have ever finished on this site....it had all the right things (made me laugh, sad, happy! and worry) im glad i stuck with it till the end!! :D thanx for writing it!

Holy freaking crap! That was amazing!! I was slightly disappointed that Harry didn't get to have a baby but I guess I'll live...lol Great Job!

Awesome story! It was completely shocking at first but I love it very much. If you ever do a sequel, I would love to read it. Great job!!!

Wow, nice! I loved Trelawney being the evil one, and I really thought I must have misread when the Evil Sister was leading in Ron!!! on a leash. ;D The relationship between Harry and Lucius was fascinating, and I loved the angst created by their... um, cultural differences. ^^ I didn't quite catch how it could be that Draco had a speed pregnancy but Snape had to go the full nine months, nor why in chapter 96 he didn't speak the counter curse earlier if he knew it. Still, loved the fic and thanks for gifting us with a feline!Harry!!! There's still too few of those around. ;D -k

Oh, I loved this. I enjoyed that you had a plot that included so many characters but still revolved around Harry and Lucius. I think having more than one set of characters in love really added to the story. The best part of course was the way Harry learned to accept the love of the pride, and watching how he grew into his place in the pride. Warm fuzzies for everyone who fell in love!! :) I am now off to check out some of your other stories.

::sighs happily:: This isn't the first time I've read this story... and gods, I still love it. Long as all get out; very, admiringly detailed, the characters portrayed excellently.... ::smiles and shrugs:: It's an awesome story, I love reading it. It's just one of those stories that you can keep coming back to, when everything else fails to capture your attention. ^__^

I have a request though, if I may... Can I please house this on my fanfiction archive? Pretty please? I'd love to add it with all the others there. ^_^ Just e-mail me and let me know! Thanks muchly! Much luck with your writing!! ::waves:: Blessed Be in all ye do! ja!