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for MUGGLE MAGIC

by Sharline

person Sharline
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah, it's been a while
person Sharline
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you are like me and have just finished Deathly Hallows... well... i'm plunged into mourning. The love of my life is no more "officially."

It amazes me how close i was to the truth. A story i created in my head just over 2 years ago.. the details of which i shared with friends and then put to paper which became Muggle Magic. That Severus loved Lily. That HE heard the prophesy. That he believed too late that it was about the Potters. He went to Dumbledore and begged for Lily's life and when it was too late he mourned her death... to the point of self punishment. It's like JKR just confirmed my deepest feelings and for that i'm so thankful. For me, it means that Severus is\was everything i ever hoped and dreamed of. That he wasn't by nature a sadistic being but one that was misundersood, brave and held love close.

Thank you JKR.
However... i wish he didn't have to die like that!
person Sharline
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you guys! I'm working on the next chapter and i'll be updating soon. Thanks again for such lovely praise... it made my day!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigoodness you have to update this! This is quite possibly one of the best fics I've ever read! Who would have thought of a muggle being at Hogwarts? It's awesome! Hurry up!
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story from the start and captivated me enough to read up to the current chapter (15). I can only hope that there is more to come, I would like to see what happens to Cassidy and Severus.
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nonnnnoooooooooooooooooooo.......you can't end it like that!!! where is the rest????!!! grrrrrr.....oh by the way, its really good. more?
person purrfus
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 14 : Some amazing examples of Murphy's Law. Nicely written. I'm curious about the Mary Sue mentioned in the author's notes. I am assuming that Mary Sue was applied to the story because you choose to use the same name for the character and your penname. Just because you like the name and decide to use it - how does that make the character a Mary Sue?

Thanks for the notes and warnings I like knowing what I am getting into. The songs seemed a bit overdone, and towards the last few chapters I started skipping over them.
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It has been a while since I read your story and I re-read it all tonight (it's 3.45am as I write this) , chapter 13 has me in tears..I am very curious as to what happens next, I loved how she told him she loved him...after all she'd been through!
After reading all of it again just now it strikes me again how well written this is, you truly are an author! Your an inspiration, I really should finish my story..., and I wish you all the best of love and creativity in 2007!
Bless you and hope you update soon because after all this time you still have me hooked!
person Helllo
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! only on chapter 5 but I AM IN LOVE!
person goodbye
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
at first this was enjoyable but no=w its just erotic kind of to the point where its getting trashy....where's the love and tenderness