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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this story. Your first chapter is excellent and it begs for more.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome! hehe its stories like this that make me look forward to anything you post! this was Hawt! i hope you continue it.. if not well them i hope you come up with something new soon cause i cant enouf of your work its always so exelent!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go on
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read more, please post the next chapter whenever possible for you
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very good introduction overall, but with the addition of Bellatrix it is starting to sound rather familiar...
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent stuff, man. It\'s a shame you\'re not going to continue it. I\'m not talking about a full-blown novella or anything, but maybe a few epilogue-ish one-shots?
-Sahaqiel
-Sahaqiel
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go on this kicks ass
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1
A nice simple introduction. It is very believable and canonical that Narcissa would bend over backwards to save her (worthless) son. So for her to approach the one man with enough influence to push through whatever wanted would be the logical choice.
And the only way that Harry would act this way was explained quite succinctly. He is extremely jaded. I wonder why? What has caused him to become so burned out and untrusting? What happened to his friends and people who he could rely on?
I do wonder how long the reflected spell will last on Bellatrix. She did not make an oath, so will she try and continue to get her revenge on Potter? Or will she become a willing partner alongside her sister?
Chris
A nice simple introduction. It is very believable and canonical that Narcissa would bend over backwards to save her (worthless) son. So for her to approach the one man with enough influence to push through whatever wanted would be the logical choice.
And the only way that Harry would act this way was explained quite succinctly. He is extremely jaded. I wonder why? What has caused him to become so burned out and untrusting? What happened to his friends and people who he could rely on?
I do wonder how long the reflected spell will last on Bellatrix. She did not make an oath, so will she try and continue to get her revenge on Potter? Or will she become a willing partner alongside her sister?
Chris