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for Finding The Truth

by vaideeassep

person TNgirl
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! Send more!!!
person Sexy Relly
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story line, please update soon, cant wait! O M G draco has sisters!
person rangerbabe
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a really interesting story!! Keep the great characters coming!!
person Bek Allen
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Ron\'s such a prat!

Please update soon! Putting this in my Rec List so I can come back to it often. Malfoy\'s sisters remind me a bit of chalk and cheese, and I swear, Ron\'s going to earn himself a black eye from Perry if he\'s not too careful!

Bek
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that their names needed to be kind of old sounding. Greek was the way to go! Thanks I\'m glad that you like them.
person Alex
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really enjoyed that chapter. PLease continue that wonderful joy in my life ;]
l8err
person Amy
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!! btw Nice names for the girls!!
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story, keep it up. My one complaint is in your description of Hermione. Hermione has very thick, curly hair that is often described as \"bushy\". The thing about hair like that is it needs to be long. If Hermione really cut her hair to chin length, it would look like an afro. No joke.
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will explain the hair then in the next chapter. I like constructive criticism! Thank you!
person t
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!
please do more!!!