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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice beginning! Keep\'em coming!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had written this! Please, for the love of all humanity, keep the chapters rolling in. ^_^
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good you MUST write more
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful first chapter. You\'ve already hooked me like a fish and I\'m eager to see where this storyline is going. And I\'m dying to know about this Remus/Hermione/Snape moment you have going here. If both men are after her I\'ll jump for joy. If not, I\'ll still be hooked. Plot sounds so juicy! Anyway, update soon.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start. And I do enjoy the twist to this story in particular.
What I like is that you made it about Hermione and her affliction and how
she has to deal with it and now she has eight men she is going to
have to stay away form is going to be interesting.
I just hope she is not going to be trying to shag each and everyone of the men.
The constant small touches her and there for some sort of touch, nothing
sexual. Having her hair touched, an arm, etc. I just hope this ins\'t a all out HO\'Mione story...
What I like is that you made it about Hermione and her affliction and how
she has to deal with it and now she has eight men she is going to
have to stay away form is going to be interesting.
I just hope she is not going to be trying to shag each and everyone of the men.
The constant small touches her and there for some sort of touch, nothing
sexual. Having her hair touched, an arm, etc. I just hope this ins\'t a all out HO\'Mione story...
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! fantastic start to a story. -the botched polyjuice experiment is an very nice thread to weave into the story.
it\'s great to read a story that\'s so well written.
hope to read more soon.
it\'s great to read a story that\'s so well written.
hope to read more soon.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this is really good. I\'m impressed with the writing and interesting plot idea. Can\'t wait to read more!!!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reminds me of a television series a few years back, Jessica Alba\'s big start in the business. It\'s an interesting (and not far-fetched) idea. I\'m looking forward to seeing what you make of it.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Tiddlywinks,
This story is very promising. I like to see where it will go.
Good luck and have fun writing,
FranB
This story is very promising. I like to see where it will go.
Good luck and have fun writing,
FranB
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the start to this story! Your idea with the Polyjuice Potion is wonderful! I am really looking forward to your updates.