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for The Person Within

by slytherinsoul07

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WTF!!!!!!!!! ....... why wont he died!!!!!!!!!!! he choked on a lemon drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you said so!!!!!!!!!!! whaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... im so confused..... you said albus was died!!!!!!!!!!!! please claify
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay......nevermind read the next chapter...... ummmm.. sorry.... i guess.... yeah ummm... nice save their with the whole albus jr thing
person Shannon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE KEEP WRITING, I AM INTERESTED TO SEE WHERE THIS GOES.
person Meg
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!!!! Yes. This story is insanely cool so far I can\'t wait for you to write more and morree!!! Please, please update soon!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I can\'t wait for chapter 4! Poor Harry! He was the geek at school with no friends!