rate_review Reviews

I have to just say that I read this whole story in one setting and loved it! Admittedly, the story needs to be cleaned up quite a bit (you have many punctuation mistakes in this story and quite a few words are misspelled, etc, and other bits and pieces that need to be fleshed out more), but overall, you're a good writer, with good ideas and lovely smut (you write that wonderfully!)

I usually don't do this, but if you're ever looking for a beta to really fix this baby up, please let me know. I included my e-mail address. I would love to work with you in making this story the best it can be! :D

Hmm, it says my e-mail is hidden. As this is the first time I leave a comment here at this archive, I'm not sure if it's hidden from YOU or just from myself and everyone else. Because I'm unsure about this, I'll give you my e-mail here, just in case. It's Goddessofmoon89@aol.com.

Please do give me a ring if you ever want to really edit this beauty. ;)

I love finding completed stories!! Esp such GOOD ones! I'm almost sad to see it end!! But I haven't read them all yet, so expect more reviews! :D

Despite the fact that I keep wanting to hurt Draco for getting in the way of Harry/Snape, I still liked the story, though I guess its just in my nature to not understand how people willingly share their mates.

OMG! This story is sooo brilliant. I can't stop thinking about it... I'm so glad I found a link to it! I can't believe I found it just now... Well, better later than never. I love you for writing it. You are a bloody genius ^_^

Ya know, towards the end of that I sometimes get the notion to box Draco about the ears for his-- behavior. i understand he lost his cild and is still grieving for it. And I wonder why in the world in 12 years neither of them beared anymore children. And Snape loves-- Harry-- right? Because waaaay back, he says on for duty and one for love or something to that tune. Well whateva, good story. Sad to see it end.

Child of the Darkened Moon

Have to say that I absolutely loved this story! The plot and everything is amazing. ^^ I liked Draco at the beginning of this story, but towards the end I really started to dislike his character. I really liked Snape all through the whole story. Harry as well. Awesome job, keep writing.
~Misery

hi, i've been reading your stories and i must say i like them, very very very much!

Really do seem to be enjoying your writing style. Read the frist one and then went to your page and have been working my way down the list and have to say so far I have enjoyed everyone I have read.
K.

I can't remember if UI had ever read through to the epilogue on this fic. But I know I have read most of this story before. I just read through it again and loved every minute and wanted you to know.