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I agree! I totally hated Draco! Do you think that some day you could redo the story but leave it with just Harry and Sev? I mean I loved the story and I have read it all the way through a couple of times, but really don't like draco being with Harry and Severus in this story, and normally I love the three of them together. I feel like I was waiting for him to get killed so that the other two would be left in peace the entire story. None the less, I really enjoyed the story and thanks for writing it.

Yours,
Angel

This is a really good story, and it might just be me but I do not shudder, wince nor think it any bit strange what you have written. What you have created is something that has been beautifully written and just show the darker side of what the human mind can think of and yet at the same time it is not as dark or as terrifying as some of histories mad-men(/women). There will always be worse and that is what you show, although I belive it is not as 'gory' as you say, but then again I do love history.
Love your story and am looking forward to reading the rest of your works.

YOu know == a lot of this reminds me of Indago. I am NOT accusing you of plagerism, i loved that story! I just have visions of that story as i read this one.

Another flawless story!

I just love your Snape, he's always so deliciously devious.

And I lay my obsession with Snarry firmly at your feet. Along with offerings of Tappioca Pudding and a plushy Potions Master.

wait wait!! WTF?!! we never get to find out what Snape's kink is?!! *pouts*

aside from that, really great story! Read it all in one night too :] *looks at the clock* crap O.o

Story was bloody great!
(Draco isn't my favourite, can't pinpoint the reason to you, sorry)

You could have killed Dumbledore if you wanted, he sure had it coming!

But your story is really great!

I have to tell you that I rather enjoy this story, rather more than I thought I would, actually. I am excited to read the darker parts, when what happens during sex is fully described rather than just alluded to. I do have a bit of difficulty reading this, though. Not because I can not handle the subject matter, but because it is clear to me that you do not have a beta, and though your writing is quite excellent, your grammar and punctuation is not exactly stellar. It appears to me that you do not always read back what you have typed, and in many instances, that second look is necessary to avoid subject/verb disagreement as well as the occasional extraneous/incorrect word usage and the complete lack of commas. For every one comma I see, there should be four or five.

Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm not trying to insult you. As I said before, your writing really is stupendous. You just need a bit of grammar clean-up. I would be more than willing to help, if you would like.

I just want to tell you that I have read this story 3 times already and it's one of my favorites. "Guilty as Sin" and "How Severus Spends his Summer Hols" are the best two stories that I have ever come across. When I visited my friends in Texas, I printed your entire story out and took it with me for the plane trip. I just got done reading this again in 3 days. You have such a great story line and kept it lively. Keep up the GREAT job and hope to see more like this from you soon!

OMG! I just read this entire thing in like the span of 3 days and I am just....blown away. This story was so brilliantly put together and captivating. You were so wonderful in the way you put so much passion and kept to the true voices of the characters throughout the entire thing, it's simply amazing. Thank you so much for posting this, I absolutely loved it and am now definitely an avid fan of your work. Simply beautiful is what Guilty as Sin is, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site.

love this story evertime i read it... it just sticks in my mind as one of the most solid au creature threesom (hot) mpreg fanfictions of all time! lol...siriusly! snapes awesome..harrys great...and ive never been a fan of draco but like in many of your fanfictions you bring harry and draco together wonderfully...believably...unlike so many other stories where its oneday all ron and hermy and then all of a sudden dracos like best buds..yay? but it really was well written, even with little stumbles along the way, you have a nice pace and it showes in the fact that even like my fifth time reading it im still in tempo with the peice even though i know whats coming next. Thanks again, i hope you finish your other fanfictions! come back to us!