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hey glad u updated, i wont be back on for days! hope i come back to some good chapters, another thing i have an idea for a story for you. harry after fifth year tries to commit suicide, he doesnt Dumbldore got temporary gaurdianship of him and sighed harry up to be given to a master and be a submissive, Dumbldore tells Snape to be visious with harry, to get him under control to scared to try and kill himself or go against them. Snape does just that, but when harry is at breaking point his occlumancy sheilds wavier and crash, snape ends up going into harry\'s mind loooking for somthing to get on him, what he finds horrorfies him, Dumbldore had told snape to do it becuase harry was spoiled thats why he agreed, he was not that bad a few slaps and kicks there and made him have sex. When he finds out, he heals harry, and they talk about everything keeping nothing out, but he offers harry to stop this contract but harry doesnt want to, he realises he needs grounded wants to be there, in the rooms he is a submissive not famous harry potter and thats how he wants to be, they kill the dark lord and they leave hogwarts

INDAGO is a Harry/Draco fic that has Snape and Draco as Doms and Harry as a sub. But he is married to Draco. It kind of goes along the lines of your story. But I like your story better.

You haven\'t lost everyone, because I\'m still avidly awaiting the next chapter. I just don\'t usually review when nothing\'s wrong with the story. Good work and keep writing damn it!

*Chocolate* *Snape* and *Update you fucking cow before we go insane!!!!*


o_o Just kidding. ^.^ I love this story! It\'s just.... amazing. Update soon, please!

\"Indago\" is a very popular story like yours, where Harry\'s a submissive and Snape and Draco are dominants and they\'re rare magical creatures. It\'s most likely because whereas your Snape is \'Superei,\' \"Indago\"\'s Snape is \'Supero...\' It\'s really good. There are a lot of similarities between your fic and Indago, so I can easily see why some people are crying foul. Yours is a really good story, but resembles it quite a bit. Actually, there was an influx of magical creature!Harry and Draco stories after Indago came out and it was annoying. Though yours is nearly like it, there are aspects that make it much different. Keep at it anyhow, it\'s good!

Great Fic! in fact, they all are ^_^ Make it as dark as you want cos this is one of the best I\'ve read

Pst, pst, Riffraff... Look here: adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/authors.php?no=25749

RiffRaaaaaaaaaff!!! *glomp* OMG You\'re back, you\'re back, you\'re back! And with such lovely offerings, also. If every time you disappear for a while you return with such fantastic presents, then, by all means, do leave more often! ...Then again, better not! You were sorely missed and it\'s a pleasure to see that you didn\'t abandon poor us. *wink* Anyway, it\'s laaate in the night on this side of the planet, and my brain refuses to cooperate, so I\'ll leave a very short review and then go to bed (but promise to return with much better and longer comments!). 1) \"ATWWW\": angsty, intriguing, and with a healthy dose of unresolved romance+UST. 2) \"Jigsaw\": complete!, well-structured, action-packed, fast-paced, In-character, mysterious AND romantic. 3) \"GaS\": dark, dark, dark, dark, have I mentioned \"dark\"? Also beautifully done: extreme but not over-acted; dark characters but not evil, unsympathetic ones; morally and thought provoking (who is right? what is right?); disturbing to the extreme yet not gore-ish (violence is not gratuitous). In other words, addictive as hell! But I already knew there was a reason I like you! As always, it would be nice to have lots and lots of chapters for this last story, but I know it\'s not meant to last (unless you\'re thinking on pulling a \"Jewel of Mirkwood\" move? *blink, blink*), so I\'ll be a good girl and enjoy the ride. ~Wishing you a warm welcome back, T-chan~
[[[ PS BTW, I personally like your threesome. Harry + Draco make a very nice couple next to Snape. Lot\'s of balance in such an equation. ]]]

DUDE!!! the last 2 chapters.. *gives 2 thumbs up* keep on keepin on.. I read INDAGO!!! that fic was fuckin intense *nodding* i was pissed 3 ways from sunday..and yet i was happy at times.. and i cried.. DUDE!!! it was fuckin insane!!!! it was FUCKIN GHREAT!!!!! just like this fic.. but yours is awesome.. Indago is GREAT!!!! i haven\'t read INdago: Reborn becuase i am afraid that i will start bitchin and getting real pissy at the characters *nodding* but anyhoo.. its a drarry pairing if you want to chk it out

Great chapter. Hope you feel better soon. Great chapters and I can\'t wait to see Snape go all monkey shit on the other Superei\'s ass. Very interesting and yes smut and a little plot never hurt anyone. Hope you do update soon! (shameless begging for an update tonight inserted here) Oh and after you get done with this story (I think you should wait until your finished so that it doesn\'t affect your story) You should definitely read \'Indago\' by LdDurham and her WIP \'Indago: Reborn\'. Absolutely Great stories and there are similarities between the stories but if you haven\'t read it you should wait so that it doesn\'t influence your story later on. Can\'t wait for an update. Keep up the great work.