rate_review Reviews

wow...amazing fic. Draco was a little annoying at times ubt you cant really blame him after what you had him go through. I cant wait to read more of your work

I wish you had done something when harry first saw the baby. Anything would have been nice. I liked this story but it is seriously in need of a beta. the fact that i kept reading says alot about the story line if you ask me. It's like you only care about the plot and not the grammar/spelling. It does get difficult to read at some point because sentences don't make sense and such. But i still loved it and i though it was very original and i couldn't wait to read it while i was at work. LOL. I'm reading The Friday Boy now...

Loved it, simply loved it - read the whole thing together, havent slept in 24 hours and start work in three but girl! that story was worth it! Kinda feel sorry for draco, after all snape simply took him for convinience. the names of boys though, paris, artremis, they sound like girls' names!

*o* this is hot shit right here XD ilu <3

Love it!
I'm reading through your stuff. It's all so wonderful!
Keep up the good work

Loved it! So well done and really interesting creature. The Dom/sub stuff was delicious!

omg. i love it! it was very dark and beautiful and sweet all at the same time. all the other hp/ss/dm creature fics iv read so far dont compare.

Well done! You cast an interesting spin on the Harry/Severus/Draco dynamic in this one. You say you hate Draco in this and I am surprised. He seemed a little OC to me in the beginning - a little too nice. But I couldn't fault his insecurities in their relationship because he was right, Severus did hold him in second place to Harry. That would have to be hard.
Thanks for a great read.

Can I just say, I LOVED it. Read it all in one sitting. Loved literally evrything about it. Highlight was definately the way Draco was portrayed. In fics he tends to be either an arsehole or a lovey dovey baby, and this fic was just PERFECT. However, I do have a bit of a thing about grammar. A lot in this fic you write things like Hogwart's and Evan's. You only need an apostrophe when using the posessive or in place of 'noun is,' for example, for Hogwarts is you might say Hogwarts's. For a word that already ends in 's' as in this example, two 's's are needed, either side of an apostrophe. Also watch your 'your, you're.' Usually they are good but occasionally they waver.

I'm sure you know all this and are just tired, so please forgive the lecture! Just thought it was worth noting. It didn't impair my enjoyment of this fic, however. It was all scrumptious. *Skips off to read more of your fics*

Loved it!!! I will definetly check out your other stories. You should also check out the story Indago...this is the link for it. http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=8094

I think you would like it.