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for Guilty as Sin

by harriet

person takadoushi
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! ACK! I\'ve read that last chapter three times and I can\'t take it anymore. I NEED MORE! PLEASEEEEEEEEE! I love dark stories. I search for these all the time and don\'t find many. So when I do I\"m fascinated. I serioulsy look for updates for this daily. And if it isn\'t there I keep checking till it is. Its a very well thought out story and I must commend you on that. Also very well. I look forward to reading the rest of the story, but will be very sad when its over. XD
person Storm
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, please (***profuse begging that last for hours with me on my knees and followed by more pitifil begging and pleading***) please don\'t kill Draco!!!!! I\"m begging you, I\'ll be your slave, do whatever you want, anything at all just please don\'t kill Draco!!!!!
person Storm
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BTW good job! Very good interactions. I was actually thinking Snape was going to kick the shit out of ol\' Moldywart! and the verbal spar between Snape and Lucius, so great! and the swift retribution by Snape dealt to Lucius. I was cheering! I\'m now blood-thirsty. Anyway Please update soon
person antipyro
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Why did Severus leave?????? Surely he didn\'t trust Lucius, even for a bit, especially after what Lucius said about his own son!!!!!!!!

....another learning lesson.....E-F\'s have no insight or sixth sense of foreboding and danger ----- tell that to Voldemort! lol


Love the story, and yes, you did your duty in warning of events to come, so tell all those complainers and whiners to bug off!

Can\'t wait to read about Severus\' reaction to it all. I hope Harry hasn\'t depleted his powers too much and that Draco makes a recovery, even though his \'pregnancy\' is more or less terminated for this round.

This virus they got from the blood.....I would guess that this may be a type of detractor to kill Aurors, now that they know of the E-F. Hmmmmm.........???????

Please, send more, when work and time permit. Amazing job of posting multiple chapters at one time.
person ayadaya
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IS DRACO DEAD? This is an awful place to leave off- update soon! The story is amazing, I check for updates on this more than any other WIP.
person Sword and Magic
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did you have to pick this horrible place to finish the chapter? :( Now I\'m forced to check every day (and probably more than once) to see if you\'ve updated it again... Draco so injured, Harry\'s magic being combined(?) with the Lucius\' magic, Draco probably loosing his child, Lucius dead... the only good thing is that Lucius can no longer betray Severus\' secret about Harry. :p

But please, update soon.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE! Please? Pretty pretty pretty please with a chocolate cover Sev. on top? I need to know what happens to Draco!!!!
person fairypoet
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i knew you would kill Draco. *sniffs*

But...i supose it was for the best...seeing as Snape loves harry...*sniffs*

write more*runs away crying*
person Neko Miu
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how sad that Lucius would do that to Draco.. if he was preggers I hope the baby survived....
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dusty tombs = old burial place
dusty tomes = old books

draws = makes a picture
drawers = place in a chest that hold clothes