rate_review Reviews

Huzzah! I loved this so much! I love creature fics and mpreg and harems, and Gah!! You did a great job with this, and you definitely did not make it over the top. Excellent work, keep it up.

I loved it!!! I read it straight thru.

I was horribly disappointed in the outcome of the story your writings great as was the plot my issues were the neglect and outright using of Draco
It bothered me so much I began to dislike Harry in the story. And evn snape. And I adore him! I couldnt focus on the story cause I kept wondering if snape. Would ever love them equally ............. clearly he ended up favoring Harry. But it's probably just me I felt like it was a waste Of Dracos life if snape loved Harry and nit Draco he should've let him. Go how unfair is that to see your mate love the other moreover than you not cool. But maybe there was a purpose I'm not aware of for poor Draco just bieng a companion...... idk just seemed terribly fucked up to me. Nice work tho. Despite my complaining. ;)

I liked it. I feel as though bits were missing. I hate time jumps. I loved Draco. I hope you've read indago now - her story puts yours to shame which is saying something since this is my second read of this :) In fact I think I read indago after seeing itmentioned in your an.

I loved it! Some pieces were a little......... not to my taste. But you didn't kill anyone (important) so that makes this a fantastic fic! (I don't need fluffy endings, but I don't like killing everyone....)
I haven't heard of this creature, but you did it very well! :-D

Adored this fic. I really like your writing style. And the Unforgiven story line was amazing.

Loved it!
AGAIN! HA! Read it years ago but it was time to revisit it!

Thanks again for writing this one!

R

Hope life find you well!

Ah, what a great story. I really enjoyed the fact that there wasn't so much angst but at the same time a smidgen more might have been welcome. I do think Draco might have been a tad more disdraught that his father hated his guts and wanted him dead. I liked the fact that you didn't slip them into the 'vampire-mold' and made the creature your own, that takes creativity and inspiration. I was sort of annoyed at the beginning when Hermione and Ron just abandoned Harry when they thought he was a murderer. A leading thread in the books has always been their support and love for him that, although wavering slightly on occasion, has always stayed strong. To have that dismissed in a few lines without them even talking it out or trying to understand him felt like you were taking the easy way out. However I do appreciate how much you have kept Severus, Harry and Draco true to character. When you said you wanted to end it dark I had a feeling that Voldie was gonna get killed but then reborn in Harrys baby but I'm glad you didn't take the " Rosemarys baby" route XD I like Paris and Aramis, just surprised they don't have a whole herd of little brothers. Don't know if you are still writing but hope so...will go check out ur other fics as I found this one on a list of recs...

omg i loved it. thank you so much

good fic. I remember reading a Story with the underground before, and the SS/DM scene in the pool in the underground but I didn't remember anything else from the story. Keep up the good work!