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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The ending was too sudden. I guess I just wanted the story to continue. I wanted a happy ending for Draco and Harry and everyone. Draco's life depressed me. He was like a slave for Snape and Harry and he wasn't even really wanted - Snape just took him for Harry's sake. I guess I wanted to have an ending where Draco's life doesn't suck. I was more sad about Draco's life than Harry's. Happy endings make me want to read a story over and over again. Depressing stories prevent me from that. So I wanted a happy ending so that I could read it over and over again. I really liked the beginning and middle. Oh, and more sex would have been fun (hehe). Pay me no mind....
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! No!(wrapping myself around your legs) I don't want it to be over! I have looked forward to every chapter with breathless excitment and I hate the fact that I won't have it to look forward to anymore. I'm one of those readers who love wip's but I just hate it when it's over. Thank you so much for writing this and I will miss it. Please tell me you have another fic on the burner ready to post.
Dixiebell
Dixiebell
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story. This is the best story I have ever read. Keep on writing.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story I hope you write more like this in the future I love stories when harry has a mate(s) The only thing I dont like about your stories in general is it takes to long to get to the plot. I understand you want to introduce the characters and set the tone and so on but I want to get to the plot and you are kind of just wandering around for 5 chapters or so, but after that your stories are amazing keep writting!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there should so be a sequel about their kids at hogwarts and how they deal with being an "unforgiven" (ect). loved it!!!! :)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're Back!!! Thank God, I was so worried when the chapters dissapeared. I was scared you were going to pull it, and I'd just die if it wasn't finished. Take all the time you need just eventually finish it, I'm more than happy to wait. This is my favorite WIP at the moment and I dread it ending, I wish it would go on and on. So happy hoildays, and have a safe one and we'll be looking forward to more updates when you have the time. Dixiebell
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! UPDATES ARE NEAT!! (yes i'm a complete dick, deal with it, i have) I love updates. and i can't wait till the next one.
(yes a totally worthless review, but a reviews a review.)
(yes a totally worthless review, but a reviews a review.)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're back! I'm soooooooooooo happy! I love this story, and have been waiting with bated breath for an update. Great chapters, and I love how Harry ultimatly beat Voldemort. And how about the Aurors? Talk about too little, too late! And figures they'd set up a treaty, so they can have thier Golden Boy back. But hey, if they don't have to live in fear of being killed just for existing, that's pretty cool, even if they're only doing it to keep The Boy Who Lived under thier thumb. Can't wait for more!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The major glitch hit everyone. But we are still with you. Glad you had a good holiday now be
a good writer and keep updating, I want to know what happens.
a good writer and keep updating, I want to know what happens.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, new chapters. :D :D :D Do the war is over, more or less anyway. :D Hm, I wonder what kind of effect Voldemort's magic will have on Harry... I hope it didn't hurt the baby though. Anyway, I loved the new chapters and hope you'll update it soon again. I can hardly wait to see what will happen. :D