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for Guilty as Sin

by harriet

person juliablack
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter i really enjoyed it. :D but the whole harry using snapes power kinda reminded me of hisoka and tsukie doing that in the vampirres lure arch of yami no matsuie(im not saying you copied but im just implying that it reminded me...oh blah im just blabbing sorry) anyways i like thsi chapter, im sorry about your toher chapters dissapearing but i guess it wasnt only yours fic, like fics posted in a certain time period also lsot chapter so :/ yeah. :D cant waite till the next one.
-Julia
person Osaki
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel vaugly cheated....I dont know if I liked the end of the story, but then again, I couldnt tell you if I liked the story to begin with.....Good job though. Youve dont something Im sure ill never do; finish a story. Yay! Keep up the good work.
person Meamz
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. Can't wait to see what you write next.
person Nicole
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. But I like the snape/harry aspect more then snape/draco. He'd definitely the third wheel
person Squallsama
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Well... you finally finished a fic--that in itself is a feat! ^_~ But this fic was quite moving in and of itself! I loved it^_^ I have to say I kind of agree about Draco.... once or twice I expected you to kill him off... but I think one of the reasons was because you favored the Severus/Harry pairing too much and adding a third, kid of off-handedly was a little difficult. It seemed maybe it was kind of last minute to keep him in the triangle maybe. I do have to say that I wasn't too fond of the constant 'Snape' and not 'Severus'. But I can see the reason why too. The relationship between Severus, Harry and Draco not exactly personal or warm. But it ended quite well and I have to say adorably^_^ The little boy I imagined their son to become, the cutest little kid in the world.^_^ Great job, I'm glad you finished it!
person akuma_river
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story. Keep up the aweosome work.
coolsa.
person Hambares
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another update! Interesting how you chose to defeat Voldemort. I like it! Can't wait for more.
person Alexandra
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it very much it ws sad that draco had to lose a baby twice though thankyou for killing lucious(sp?)
person spikeprop
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED this fic. You kept me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part the entire time. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
person Ashley
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. It had a very good plot and I really liked your characterization of Harry. Good Job!