rate_review Reviews

I adored this story. At times I would squirm in my chair as I read it--some of the things you wrote were squiky (at least to me!) Overall, the story was great. It flowed, you smoothly brought in new characters and explained the goings on with ease. It was delightful to read and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.

I'm sad to see it end. I loved thisand look forward to anything else that you write. I have been very hard to please as of late, and I can safly say that this is one of only a few fics that I have read in the past few months that I haven't wanted to track down the author and ask how they could post such crap on the internet. Anyway, all those things aside, I likexd the characters, though I must agree that Draco as a character seemed a little underdeveloped.

Man, that was such a good story.
But really...the ending sucked.
It was anticlimactic and droll.
I'm dissappointed.

Congratulations on anotehr wonderful read! I know you say that you hated DRaco in this, but I beg to differ. He really helped things along and Harry would have been lost without him. To bad he only had a chance to have a baby outside of teh lines of teh story. Would have been fun watching him whine while giving birth! Good luck to your muse! I can't wait to read your next offering!
Take Care!

I'm not dissappointed and you have every reason to be proud of your story. I'm glad you didn't turn it even darker. Like any good story though, I wonder..... So Harry only had one son? I was hoping he had more, but then again considering what they have to go through when gestating it probably made sense. Harry mentioned sending his oldest off to school so I was wondering if he had more or if he and Draco shared the two sons. Also, considering how warm and friendly Snape was with Dumbledore, it was a bit dissippointing that he was still so mean and miserable with his Inferi. Yes, the dom thing is part of their persona, but after a dozen years and children together couldn't they have gotten to a place where Harry was more than just contented with his scars because he had even less growing up? Great sex does not hold a family together, inferi instincts aside. I congratulate you on finishing your story. I'll be the first to say I can't write for anything and you have written lots (I know because I read everything you write!), remember it's not a flame just one readers pet quirk. Take lots of bows and enjoy the feeling of accomplishment. I will read anything else you write!

Mixed Feelings..... I liked the snape/harry bit, nay loved, but all through it i hated draco. i was secretly hoping you'd kill him off, as he was giving me the shits. plus i'm a real hard arse bitch who hates sharing, i was harry could have snape all to his little ownsome. i wouldn't have even been heart broken if you'd killed off the kid, but hell oh well. i still loved it, it was a wild ride!! so i can't wait to see what you come up with next! snape/harry??? plz?!?!?!

I absolutely loved it!!!! It does have potential for continuation....Snape and the new trio at school and Harry and Draco in Hogsmeade---possibly more siblings.....hint hint!!

Well... the ending is quite fluffy... but I liked it nontheless. How did you want to end it, though? Killing Harry during birth? I don't know if I had liked that better. I was a bit disappointed about Snape conspirating with Dumbledore. It means Harry has still been manipulated till the end, and he isn't even aware of it.

omg im actually crying...i dont want it to be over...i really dont...i really really loved this and i cant bloody believe that im crying...would it be possible that there would be a sequel? one where Draco gets killed *cough*...dont get me wrong, i loved Draco lol, but i dont like Draco/Severus..and they had a kid *pouts*...im still crying...please do a sequel..plwaseeee, my heart is broken cuz its over...i have some questiongs though..whos heather? and is Severus aloud to hit the kids like he does Harry and Draco?...lol well this was retarted review..but i hope that you can see that i really loved it...its my favourite Harry/Severus fic *nods*..(im stll crying)...well i better go lol..i do hope thats theres a sequel, to learn more about Harry and Dracos sons, and Draco getting killed *cough* (i can not believe im asking htat:O i love Draco)...talk to you later ;) *hugs you* thank you so much for writing this!

yay!! XD I loved that story from head to toes! For one minute I feared for Harry's life though *lol* but as always you've put a hell of a plot in this one; Don't change anything! It's really perfect (even if now I'm curious to see how they live once that they're finally settled)

maybe now you could concentrate in finishing your other fictions *lol* >>

I hope to see more of that writtings of yours ! XDDD