rate_review Reviews

Thank you for this wonderful story!

I loved it!
It was so fun
reading it you always
had something new to
give us.

Now for a little begging I feel compelled to do.
Please Please Please put out the alternate ending
that you had planned from the start. I don't know why
but I really want to know what you were orginally going to
do. I get that it was sad or at least not nearly as happy as
the one you posted, but I really want to read it. Besides it's
a way to denie the end has come to this delightful fic. I hope
you decide to write and post the chapters for all of us who are
to curious for our own good. Thank you for the wonderful fic.

-Mashell

First, I would like to state that I don't review FF until it is complete, so I have been a silent follower for a while. On to the review. The concept was very original and I truly enjoyed the fic. The rise (and fall) of Voldemort, Snape bringing Malfoy into the "family" to give Harry a break, all made the story addicting, and spent way to many nights up later than I should have just to keep reading. I'm not that into roughness, or Draco for that matter, but the relationship between the Superei & Inferei was fascinatiing. And, even though you stated you're not the "fluffy ending" type, having Paris sitting in the compartment with Weasley & Longbottom, was great. Brought it full circle.

Thank you so much for sharing, and I will keep my eye out for any more HP/SS fanfiction you may post.

absolutely loved it.!!!! i think you ended it in a good spot instead of draggin it on forever. very well written and your backgrounds didn't conflict

Hi, Riffraff.
I loved "Guilty as Sin." One of the reasons -I'm a sucker for good story-lines that often are a li-ttle difficult for some readers to stomach, and endings that give you this warm, fuzzy feeling.
The biggest reason though, is just that, I loved it. Doesn't make sense, but that's the way it is. I don't know how many readers out there agree with me, ('cuz I wasn't quite the careful reader reading the same chapter over and over to check for underlines and errors-I never am when I really like a story) but "Guilty as Sin" pushed my buttons the right way, all along. The 'weave' of the story stitching the violence and fluff together was subtle enough, I never really thought of it the way you sometimes mentioned in your A/Ns.

I hated Draco too! He was such a brat. - Totally necessary, if you ask me. His brattiness made Snape's snits seem all the more glorious, and Harry all the more... well, you know.

Now. I've read and reviewed, told you what I thought of the ending (I think I did). As to what I'd like to see next... I think I'll take anything that comes 'from your keyboard'! Nothing is *NOT* cliche, I mean, how long has mankind been daydreaming about fucking their neighbor, or the neighbor's dog? Or wondering, "why the hell did that end right there?" ... Cliche or no, I would much rather read your next fic soon, than wait half a decade while you go hunting for something new.

Ugh!
That was one hell of a long review. So, in case you've forgotten what I wrote in the beginning, I've summed it up.
- I loved your story, the ending, the way Draco was all bratty because it made the other leading roles more appealing, and that I'd love to see your next fic, as soon as possible, if I had any say. >u/ with luv, nickel

Your story was incredible! I was always so excited when you had put up new chapters. I loved it so much and I even cried at a few parts, but the plot and use of it was....well words can hardly describe this work of art! I have read other stories of yours long back and I always left my own reviews on them too. But this takes them all away. I wish you could write another one of these. I would simple adore it! An incredible inspriation to us all if I do say so myself, so many ideas that would flourish with your story! Again incredible story and a whomping ending!

Personally, I loved how your portrayed every character. There were times when I flinched from the ways of the Elith-Furatu, specifically the Superei. Lucius's death also left me a bit shaken. And Draco's loss of child as well. The connection formed between Draco and Harry was touching really. They held the same traits as before when they fought in school, but also they leaned on eachother for both moral and emotional support as they were both experiencing something entirelly foreign and Snape just isn't the type to comfort. ^^ A sequel would be interesting, but I'm not requesting one. Paris seems like a good kid and I'd love to learn more about him. Anyway, I've wasted too much of your time telling you about your own story. In short, I adored this story and followed it like a hound until it was finished. Fabulous work!!

Personally, I loved how you portrayed every character. There were times when I flinched from the ways of the Elith-Furatu, specifically the Superei. Lucius's death also left me a bit shaken. And Draco's loss of child as well. The connection formed between Draco and Harry was touching really. They held the same traits as before when they fought in school, but also they leaned on eachother for both moral and emotional support as they were both experiencing something entirelly foreign and Snape just isn't the type to comfort. ^^ A sequel would be interesting, but I'm not requesting one. Paris seems like a good kid and I'd love to learn more about him. Anyway, I've wasted too much of your time telling you about your own story. In short, I adored this story and followed it like a hound until it was finished. Fabulous work!!

Personally, I loved how you portrayed every character. There were times when I flinched from the ways of the Elith-Furatu, specifically the Superei. Lucius's death also left me a bit shaken. And Draco's loss of child as well. The connection formed between Draco and Harry was touching really. They held the same traits as before when they fought in school, but also they leaned on eachother for both moral and emotional support as they were both experiencing something entirelly foreign and Snape just isn't the type to comfort. ^^ A sequel would be interesting, but I'm not requesting one. Paris seems like a good kid and I'd love to learn more about him. Anyway, I've wasted too much of your time telling you about your own story. In short, I adored this story and followed it like a hound until it was finished. Fabulous work!!

Loved the end of the story it was a great ending