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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
actually this story is the only snape draco and harry relationship thing Ive ever read actually so I would say i loved draco in this one, you know I would love you to make a vampire story thats one thing you have not done. perhps Harry realising he is a pawn and Dumbledore doesnt really care along with loosing his godfather was too much for him? so he tries to kill himself? that would be good. then snape has to change him.
or one were Dudley is put under the imperio curse to kill the Durleys and and then harry then himself somthing like that tho Dumbledore and snape get there in time to save harry, they blame him for the murder of the dursleys going against him hehe of course perhaps everything is fugured out by snape! that would be cool great story anyway
or one were Dudley is put under the imperio curse to kill the Durleys and and then harry then himself somthing like that tho Dumbledore and snape get there in time to save harry, they blame him for the murder of the dursleys going against him hehe of course perhaps everything is fugured out by snape! that would be cool great story anyway
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it, but wonder exactly what the prophecy about paris was. was it just that he would be one of the first accepted unforgiven, or something else. come on i question these things
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!
Took me a couple of dys to read it, but I loved it!
I'm such a sucker for HP/DM/SS =]
~B~
Took me a couple of dys to read it, but I loved it!
I'm such a sucker for HP/DM/SS =]
~B~
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! I'm speechless, i loved it that much. it's just so well writtne. not to mention it has lots of good scenes.
i wasn't to sure about reading a story this long (even though i did read a 102 chap story once) but i gave it a go and i was hooked. Okay sorry, now i'm rambling. BUT IT WAS JUST THAT GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
okay i'll stop now.
i wasn't to sure about reading a story this long (even though i did read a 102 chap story once) but i gave it a go and i was hooked. Okay sorry, now i'm rambling. BUT IT WAS JUST THAT GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
okay i'll stop now.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just finished this, having been on vacation for the last few weeks. you did a fantastic job. :)
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Guilty as sin was realy well written, and i strongly encourge that you write a part two for it, the way that you leave it kinda gives you the idea that there is more to come.
anyway it is a well written piece of work.
anyway it is a well written piece of work.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice. probably read this way after you finished it, but - hey, good, dark and it holds together. i can tell what novels you've read, too! hee!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Differnet but just breath taking!
I really do love your writingstyle and it sure IS exiting to read your storys because one never know what comes next *g* Thank you so much..
I hope you'll write more more and more because I just can't get enough..
Especially Snape as a dominant Seme is so hot! I want more... T_T (Me = Riffraff Slave*lol*)
I really do love your writingstyle and it sure IS exiting to read your storys because one never know what comes next *g* Thank you so much..
I hope you'll write more more and more because I just can't get enough..
Especially Snape as a dominant Seme is so hot! I want more... T_T (Me = Riffraff Slave*lol*)
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story, read it in something around two days. I don't know why I liked it so much, as usually violence isn't my favorite type of story, but this one really got my attention. Very nice write, and I hope to see more of your writing thats as interesting as this. In fact, me thinks that I'll see what other stuff you've got posted, if any. =)
~ Riisa Holeva
~ Riisa Holeva
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.k. in the beginning I was dubious about this fanfic...bu-ut I decided to read all the way through....*yawns widely* only took two days....and I have concluded....that I REALLY LIKED IT!!! It could pass as a book, so much detail and the way you portray everyone....
On a scale of 1-10....I give it 10.
*smiles tiredly* now if you'll excuse me....bed is calling....damned lack of sleep....
I can't wait to see what other stories you have up.....
night night
Liz
On a scale of 1-10....I give it 10.
*smiles tiredly* now if you'll excuse me....bed is calling....damned lack of sleep....
I can't wait to see what other stories you have up.....
night night
Liz