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I don't normally read fics like this but i found it very well written some spelling errors, some misplaced names when they were to be anothers .

I am actually rereading your fics and decided to give this one a go surprise i liked it.

Okay, I just read it all, because I had started it and I had to finish.

I don

This was certainly a ride! A good one but a ride no less. Mind you I read this all in one go so really it was spectacular. I also had moments of going "oh it has 30/40/50 chapters, Yesss" this is all while reading until 3:25am where I live. Thanks for the wonderful and compelling story
JaNe Tentailes

Oh my goodnessssssss I love it.

I loved it! I did feel a little sorry for Draco sometimes...

OMG THAT WAS AMAZINGGGGG!!!!! And I really like how you showed Severus loving Harry (I'm assuming) and how Severus was proud of his son and just... I really liked this like, a lot

Fabulous story! Didn't ever want it to end. I didn't care all that much for Draco either but I think you kept him in character. I was kind of hoping at the end it would only be Severus with Harry. Seems like Harry was the one he really loved even if it was a strange kind of love. I am curious as to why they only had one child each since they come into season once a year. I would think there would be several siblings by now. Unless I missed it I don't think you ever said what this prophesy was with Paris and Severus.

It was quite obvious that you hated Draco. Maybe it's because you're predominantly a Harry/Snape person so you're immediately biased. I have to say thank god you don't write anymore with Draco in it. People keep saying how he was in the way(But of course, they'll say that, they're Harry/Snape lovers. Obvious since they've read your other works), I have to say if he wasn't there, it will be Harry who would be used as a punching bag. As it is, with Draco there, he gets the brunt of Snape's anger even if he's the only one defending Snape's actions. I find it quite stupid of him since NEITHER Harry nor Snape appreciate his presence. And Harry who couldn't even 'forgive' him, just because he stated an opinion different from his own. Kind of hated Harry though, you said he was the 'stronger' of the two, yet I felt it was obvious that it was Draco who was stronger. He was the one coming up with plans, trying to keep them together and being there for BOTH Harry and Snape. And they both just don't deserved it. It was obvious Draco cared for Harry even scolding Snape for his own stupidity yet Harry couldn't be bothered to do the same. Especially the scene with Lucius. Draco was the one who noticed Snape's health status and decided that they should do something. I don't know if you meant it to come off that way but I think both snape or harry would be clueless without him.

I'm quite glad that you're not writing another Draco/Harry/Snape. This was quite ridiculous and you didn't have to admit you hated Draco. Reading your fic, we get the idea.

Okay this is a big love hate for me. I loved your righting still but I really hate what you did with Draco. You basically made him harry's scapegoat. And the sad thing is you kept saying how Harry was the stronger of the 2 but yet you allowed Draco to bare most of the responsibility. The you at one point in my opinion stated that Snape loved loved Harry more. I believe it was the lime "some a duty. Other for the love" it was in your later chapter. What even put the icing on the cake for me was the fact that Draco admitted to having feeling for Snape and defended Snape while Harry outright disrespected the relationship. I would admit to thinking that I hoped you would have killed off Harry but then I would be afraid of how it would have effected Draco and I do believe it wouldn't have been in a positive way. I would think it better if you would have left Draco out of the story but I do have theories of why you felt need to have him in. He had to be there to give Snape an outlet. He had to be there to be there to support Harry when Harry needed it. Because truly other then that the had no purpose in the story. Oh yeah he was also used as blackmail material. Best way for Snape to protect his mate if you ask me right. But then again even Draco feel need to protect Harry and Harry didn't even have the decency to do the same. I mean in the beginning when he was raped by his cousin how Draco wanted to take him under his wing when his friends wanted nothing more to do with him and then for Harry to encourage Draco to take one for the team by allowing Snape to pimp him out..... Sad. All in all I feel that Draco was the glue that held these three character in this story together but qt the same time he is the one that was under appropriated.... Snape was truly a bad dominate as far as Draco was concerned but then again to Snape Draco was a means to an end. Now. I am so sorry about ranting and I hope that you can forgive me please. I really did enjoy your writing. Though after the first couple of chapter I kept having to force myself to read through it in hopes for a better ending for Draco. I willing to check out your other stories hopefully they don't make me sad like this one. Once again you did a wonderful job. Keep up the great work.

cool so far wish i knew what he was