rate_review Reviews

The sequal was just as good as the first, if not better. And, considering I am new to Lucius/Hermione, it's one of the best I've ever read! But really, you write really well. The only problem that I noticed was sometimes you will write "your" for "you are" instead of the correct "you're". But, other than that, it was really good.

'Till a later review--
Athene

Loved the first and second.
Brilliantly writen.
If only happy endings like that happened more often.

Its ok that Lucius went all out of character, everyone wants to see a little Lucius fluff now and then. Good story =)

I read this story at ff.net. It rocks. I hope you write more L/Hr fanfic. Can\'t wait for more.

That was a short but exciting story. Yeah, Lucius was OOC but it worked. Thanks for sharing.

That\'s the thing about writing, love. Sometimes, the characters get away from you, and do what they want to do, no matter how hard you try to get them to fit in your outline of how YOU think the story should go. Stubborn little gits, characters. Even if they\'re someone else\'s characters. Hard to rope the little critters in. You did a fine job, regardless. Keep up the good work.

I think that Lucius is a flexible character. He is not as set in stone as Severus, or Ron and Harry, because he is not used as often. To keep him in character, you need only portray him as a very well spoken, proper pureblood with access to very powerful magic. I think you did very well with this story as well as the first. I don\'t understand though, How come you didn\'t just add this story as a second chapter to the first? I think you should make this story more than just one chapter sequels. It is a good plot idea, and could be so much more, if you gave it the chance.

Amazing, simply amazing and you can have Lucius ooc anytime you want. I personally would love to see another story following Hermione and Lucius in the beginnings of their relationship and the reaction of others. I know that Ron might have left Hermione to be with someone not so \'bookish\' like Luna but I think he\'d have a fit if she were to end up with Lucius after having been dumped by him. It\'d be interesting to see.

Either way, loved it!

Honestly, I don\'t think he actually got much out of character. Lucius always acts arrogantly and cooly, so we might never know what he\'s like when in love and happy. Maybe that\'s how he\'d be, then. Anyway... the sequel was great!! I loved it!! :)