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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Ending! XD
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey forget about the mistakes. They don
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really cool. I thought it was Lilly, instead of Molly. I would love to read another potterverse story from you.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Several correcting to your story: you wrote, that Severus is 16 - it means we are somewhere around 1976. Heavy metal i OK, it started around 1970 or a little later (suggestion for the band: Judas Priest). But you messed up the clothing. Metal fans of that time did not wear big trousers. They wear it as tight as possible. I\'m not sure about the chains, it seems wrong. Severus had spikes in his hair in your story - another mistake, in 1976 men wear their hair free. Concept of a Gothic girl first appeared somewhere around 1985, or even later. And the piercings. Now it\'s common, but surely not then.
Last thing: you have the age of Bellatrix quite right, but not Molly, she is older. In 1976 she is around 30 and already is maried and has children.
Last thing: you have the age of Bellatrix quite right, but not Molly, she is older. In 1976 she is around 30 and already is maried and has children.