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for The Wonders of Obliviate

by lix

schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gurl please write more, it is too good thank you.
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dying for an update i love this!
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a clever pansy shocking! but at what, it figures.
person Arlene
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh very interesting! Please continue.
person 2bfoundwanting
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I am really liking this story. Draco is a little OOC, but i like him this way! One thing tho, unless i missed something and Pansy used a spell or something, there isn't any gaurantee that she will get pregnant... but yah, sorry.. teensy detail, Please update soon, i cant wait for more!
person lemonade
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Pansy is EVIL!!! VILE!!! WICKED!!!

I wonder what Draco is going to do now.
person mona
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooo i hate her! anyway i hope she doesn't become preg and can't have kids! update soon!
person Yawn
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Fans self: Talk about sexual tension! Story is too good for mere words. I'm literally shocked, amazed and blown away by how much I enjoy reading this story. Draco and Hermione are hot!
person mona
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story i think it's great just the way it is although you know if you want to put i don't know a bit in there with hermione getting herself off with draco watching her without her knowing and then perhaps she does she him or not and he just gets a peek or whatever but it's your story you can do what ever you want lol anyway update soon this is great!!!