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for The Embrace of Darkness

by serpentlady

schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s pretty good, but uh, your chapters are pretty short. Also, whats with the Dumbledore bashing? O-O Does everyone always have to do that to make Voldemort look good? Altho heh, I must say it\'s a pretty interesting take on Dumbledore\'s personality. But wow, people must really like H/V pairings because that is one of the few things carrying this story. It\'s good, but not that good. If only you would make the chapters longer! T-T It could be so much better . . . .
Also, plz don\'t tell me Voldemort\'s going to really be a \"good guy\" deep down. XP Why can\'t anyone write him as the sly malicious, insensitive bastard that he truely is?
person KrumKrum
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well written story, I love it alot. Can you please update so us reviewers can read it???? You must update, please update ASAP! I want to read the next chapter so badly, and I\'ll read this fanfic all over again. ^^; lol.
person Lothirielwen
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter please
person TyRisha
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it sounds good. i thought i had reveiwed this chapter - i guess not. please continue
person momo
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, to memories?
person momo
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think it would have been better if he pretinded not to know anything
person Raichan
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. IN YOUR FACE DUMBLEDORK!!! YOU GO HARRY!! ^_^ I have always hated Dumbledork. Everytime he spoke, I dreamed about ways to kill him for leaving Harry with such abusive relatives. Make Harry find out he has other living relatives that are way nice and make him want to beat the crap out of his Headmaster! Come on, it\'ll be fun! I love the Dumbledork bashing and the love between Voldy and Harry. ^_^ I wonder what Harry will think of Voldy\'s new body? Or should I say \'old body\'? Hehehe. Love the story a lot, continue!
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job luv it post more soon please
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol can\'t wait for harry\'s next move and I am glad to see that snuffles appears to be on harry side. I really am fond of Sirius!
person cutter
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This is so cool!