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for The Embrace of Darkness

by serpentlady

person Chris F.
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope you update again really soon, I am loving this fic. Although for some unknown reason, after reading those last two chapters I have an argue for some Harry/Ron action lol
person frozenrose
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! YOU...YOU...YOU...! I can't believe you left it like that! I'm so into your story that I can't believe it's not finished yet (I love finished stories)! And if you don't finish I shall use even more exclamation points in my next review!!!!!
person Danni
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im in love with this story <3
person haymak
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story and I am looking forward to an update. I read this story a while back, and I hope that this current update means that this story is up and going again. Thanks for a good read!
person Reamar
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sso what if it'ss jusst an interlude...I loved it! I can't wait to ssee what happenss nexxt.
person rai
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good god. what a emotionally powerful chapter. every sentance was like a blow to my guts. ^_________________^

now we're talking PUNCH lines. *sniggers*

well, dry jokes aside, this was extremely powerful to read. Voldies OOC-ness seemed SO RIGHT, and I could prectically feel the electricity sparkling in his bloodred eyes, even though you didn't even mention it! :D I love the way you wrote it. Truly, I do. Now I'm off to read the rest of the chapters. It was just that your first chapter sorta SLAMMED into my head, so I had to review and tell you it was great. xD I've NEVER gotten that intense feeling while reading the FIRST CHAPTER.

you've got the ability to capture both them AND me in your words. awesome. <3

xD! <3<3<3
person rai
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
liked it? I LOVED it. still the same writing, and DUMBLE!BASHING ftw. xD

AWESOME. <3 and I like cookie.
person rai
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME. x3! me loves it!

if it's not too much to ask, would you mind terribly to send me an email the next time you update? cuz I'm not good at keeping track at fanfics. >.< and I REALLY REALLY don't wanna miss the rest of this. xD

keep up your AWESOME work!! xD

much love! <3
person Echo
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Seems like Hermione chose her side. Ron also calmed down but is he with Harry? Please update soon.
person Reamar
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved thiss chapter! Esspecially the tirade. Sso will Hermione be againsst Harry? What about Ron? I actually /like/ the ssusspence in thiss fic! Pleasse update ssoon.