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for The Embrace of Darkness

by serpentlady

person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol ^-^ please continue !!! Cookie?
XP some one get it right i want to know !!
person galaxy
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The pop culture Reference is from the band The Offspring, song \"Fire, Water, Burn\" \"I\'m the root of all that\'s evil, yeah, but you can call me Cookie\". Btw, love your story!
person Tesgura
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I bet Dubledoor did it. He\'s a bastard and I hate him. Good plot, can\'t wait for the next update.
person acr
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your first chapter. Not as sure about this one. The essence of magic is \'cookie\'? That\'s sort of silly.

BTW, what kind of font are you using? Your quotes all looked a bit weird in my browser, even after I changed the encoding. You may want to paste your stories into Notepad or Wordpad, then copy them and paste them onto aff.
person Missi
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!! PLEASE, YOU MUST CONTINUE!! WHY\'D YOU STOP?! THIS FIC IS AMAZING AND I ABSOLUTELY ADORE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
person foxygirl
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cookie? Cute name. Made me laugh and my dorm mates look at me funny. Anyway... love the story, update soon.
person Missi
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEE* Thanks for updating, I can\'t wait for the next one!!
person Storm
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start. I like it and can\'t wait to read the next update.
person morgie
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it, love it, keep writing
person bunny
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! please update! cool story!!!