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Absolutely loved it!!

Chapter 13 -

Bird wings? With feathers? Where, in the human, elven, and/or vampiric genes do birds come in? They're not related to mammals, at all. Furred wings, such as are found in bats, would be far more believable. Then you have Harry ignore certain statements that *should* have had him asking very pointed questions on at least two occasions: the first being when Bree told Harry that his ears were being hidden by a glamor (and ignores how the true shape couldn't be felt). And then when Harry wakes the first time in his new bedroom, he doesn't have to search for the bathroom, despite not having been shown it. You ignore the details at the detriment of your story.

But in general, this is a good story, so far.

This story was brilliant. I couldn't stop reading. The development of Harry's character was amazing to see. I love how you wove the characters around each other. The family bond between Harry and Severus was not only original, but the way you did it made it very believable. Many times when Severus is suddenly some long lost relation to Harry, it turns out dry and predictable(long lost brother of Lily seems to usually be the theme). I loved how you brought them around to the idea of being related slowly. It tends to aggravate me when they just accept each other suddenly with open arms. The hesitancy and slowly growing affection for each other was refreshing to see.
The sexual encounters were intense and very satisfying. I enjoyed being able to read a story that not only had lots of yummy sex scenes but that there was a true plot to the story as well.
This story was very well written and I loved the plot. Not something I have read a million times already. Wonderful. I really must see what else you have archived here.

This has to be one of my favorite stories that you have written.
You are a great writer.
Nice work! ~ Keep it up!

LOVE IT!! just LOVE IT!!

Kyaaaaa!!! I love the epiloge. I wish you'd have written in details though; the time lapse is quite long and i love preggy dray :D. Also, more sev x hermonie would be nice (although i prefer sev with either remus or sirius or in threesome *cackles with evil glint in the eyes*). Although harry doesn't seem that angry about his childhood, i wish there'd be more drama to that. I guess the fic would be more gripping. Anyway, i really enjoy this and please continue writing, k. Ja ne. :D

i thought it was very well written. there wasn't a real dom in the story so it was different for me.

I forgot to review this the first time I read it, I think. I absolutely love this fic! It is one of my favorite HP/DM fics (I've read a lot of them, especially the longer one's so that's saying quite a bit). I reread this and off-handedly decided to check if you'd written anything else. Much to my surprise you have many other stories! I am off to read them all. Thank you very much for the time you put into writing fanfics. I am sure I will enjoy reading them on this lazy afternoon! Thanks again.

thank you for writing it it wwas a very very good one
keep writing and post
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