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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting more please>...
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor harry please update soon!!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey yall i am having some really bad computer problesm so i cant continue the story.. I am really sorry! i have 54 chaps written out already b/c it hasnt ben workin... i am at the library rite now and really probably shouldnt be on b/c theyre gona think in weird.. But ill try to somehow get it on...thanx....and
its is only this story for some reason... my comp wont transfer it.. i am really poed w/ it...
just thote id tell yall
its is only this story for some reason... my comp wont transfer it.. i am really poed w/ it...
just thote id tell yall
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is horrible. You should learn to write before you post anything.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully you get your computer fixed soon, it\'s a good story with a lot of potential and I can\'t wait to see where you take it. I hope you do continue this. Spell-check would help in reading though, it\'s a little difficult and distracting to figure out which word you wanted. Or perhaps a beta to look over it with you to help with misspellings. Hope you continue this soon.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am going to probably update tomorrow i was at shows all weekend...sorrry!! but i wrote more of it in the car so its up to 22 pages!!!!!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanx .. yeah the first chap isnt finished but i am having loading problems so i have to type it in the spot.. Make it really hard.. But ill try!!! Thanx!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I think you should take this down, fix the errors, and maybe even write more as a beginning chapter. It has potential but needs a lot more work.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, good plot line, but you really need to use spell check. It\'s kind of hard to read as is, correct spelling will make it much better. If you don\'t have one, there are several on the web that you can use, just google for them.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm..... Ok lets see: There are words that are not even close to being spelled right. I don\'t know if thats a formatting problem you had when you uploaded it, but either way you should always go to the page and read your story to make sure everything uploaded correctly. Also the story is extremely lacking detail adn of course I hope you will elaborate more as you continue. Hope you find to continue.
Good Luck
Good Luck