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for Into The Long Dark

by Wolfiekins

person avihenda
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was a great chapter! I'm getting more and more interested in the combination harry /rael and now this new one with n / tommy.
sounds like this next chapter will show of some of harry's "real" magic aka dark arts magic. Sounded like a fight is comming, only question is, are they death eaters or vampires?
I'm dieing to know! so please write the next chapter soon!
person avihenda
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, I just reread the hole thing and realized that I had missed the chapter where harry and rael talk at the club.
no wonder that part was a bit jumpy when I read it lol. usually works better when you read the HOLE fic ;-P

I just checked your reveiws, how can you only have 11 reveiws for 15 chapters when the fic is this good? Are ppl being that lazy?

hope you write more soon. this is one of my favorite fics at the moment. :-)
person avihenda
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. I love this fic. I want more harry and rael interaction. love that combination.
person nox_lumen
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the way you handle snape after book 6. i like the not a good guy but not loyal to voldie ideal. i also look forward to seeing whare things are going with rael. can't wait for the next chapter. please post it soon.
person ryuuta
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post chapter 9! *begs* You have accidentally posted chapter 8 two times. About the story - good going! :D And Harry truly is a brat. Argh, I wish I could read more.
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe it is just my browser messing up, but chapter nine looks an aweful lot like chapter eight...
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all I love the story.

So who is Harry going to end up with?
Since this isn\'t in the crossovers or Original Male Character, sub categories, I must think that
Harry is going to end up with one or both of the main cast, so is it Snape, Malfoy or both?

Btw the last chapter is just a copy of the one before it, Dragon\'s Teeth.

Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
person DP
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You iploaded the wrong chapter. You have chapter 8 twice. Cool story so far
person Quichi
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeet story. Vampires and everything. Tre cool! Does Snape know who\'s got Draco? and if so, why\'s he letting it go? Is it jsut cux he thinks Draco deserves it? I eagerly await the next installment!
person Cambrianwhitewitch
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore the way you write, anopther author I love told me about you. she wasa so correct. I noticed that the whole story is on HPFN, IO am going to enjoy waiting with all others for you to update.

Cam