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I was wandering, were you basing Tom\'s looks on Christion Coulson? Because if you weren\'t, I was.I could just picture him being so lovingly evil.

My goodness!
2 chapters in one nite
how do u do it!?!?!?
this chapter is honestly better than the other by far!

Can\'t belive I missed a part. I must say you are a wonderful writer. You have done what few can manage, which is write an OFC and not turn her into some sugery sweet Mary-Sue, and for that alone I tip my hat. Claudia is avery real character with realistic responses, I also like how you are portraying Tom, please keep up the good work. I also agree with you on the fact that there are way to many Hermione, Ginny, Lily, and yoai/slash parings out there it is really becoming hard trying to find a good het orginal paring fic.

P.S.
Do you have anymore TR/VL & OFC fics out?

omg!!!
this is sooo interesting
is he gonna fall in love with her?
pls say yes!!!
cant wait for the nxt update
hurry please!!!

yay another update!
so theyre getting married aye...
i can sense something bigs gonna happen with bella

I like your portrayal of Bella. I have always believed their interactions were as such. She was totally loyal to Tom, always willing to do ANYTHING for him, and he seemed to pay attention but soo...flipantly. She was always so willing to offer herself, and Lord Voldemort was always so eager to take. Having said that, it makes her reaction to the news so believable. I can\'t help but think that she would face whatever Tom could do to her if it meant that Claudia was out of the way. I have always thought of her as twisted like that.

Also I would like to compliment you, once again, on the reactions that Claudia has. Her unwillingness to marry, I feel, (and tell me if I am wrong) is partly due to the fact that Tom has admitted his relationship with Bella. There are of course the numerous other complex reasons, but you seemed to lean towards the previous mentioned reason in this chapter. Perhaps I am wrong, either way, that is what I took it as, and it is so bitter sweet. It is like a tragedy done in verse, the actions are terrible but the words sooth you as you read. It is like being craddled by death and though afraid you feel warmth in its touch. Something that should be seen as so awful but yet your soul cannot help but accept it with some semblance of joy.

But, I digress, I seem to being just rambling now.. *sorry* :)

*Releases the breath she\'s been holding* I feel oddly relaxed by the turn of events, like we have overcome one hurtle. Still, I know that there is so much more to come. I am wondering what that pesky Bella is getting upto, and just what will happen between TR and OFC now. You truly do now how to keep the angst going, despite the small release offered in this chapter. I can\'t wait to read more!

Matty, as you know, I love this story, and I\'m loving reading through it all again :) Each chapter makes me feel like I\'m there and never bores me. Claudia is original and creative because she is strong even though she has her own faults and Tom...well...what can I say about him? haha. But I think you know what I mean. Looking forward to reading through the next chapters again!

maybe you can add some Draco/Ginny appearance (in the good old way D is a DE G. is a rebel)
Just kidding
I wanted to say that it

I like how you painted your OC\'s reaction. The fact that she is shocked and not frantic, unwilling but so affected by Tom, is so very unusual. That does not mean, however, that it is in anyway unreal. I think that was an incredibly smart and creative way to have her react. I wait, with baited breath, for the next installment.

P.S. Please stay safe during the possible approach of yet another hurricane.