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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there - I havent managed to login to my account here thanks to probs with the password... so this is it, my review...
From the first paragraph I am pulled into your story. Your fine attention to details paints a vivid picture. The chararacterisations are richly drawn - and we have a keen sense of the dynamics between Riddle and Bellatrix. Bella's 'loyalty' to her man is blind - she takes issue with other women when it the man she is a slave to that she should take issue with - that and just how much she allows herself to be used. She allows herself to be used knowing that she is being used. A marvelous insight into her charachter. It is striking that one who can outwardly seem so strong is actually quite weak. And this weakness makes her despised by the one she adores. Love and Voldemort are not naturally symbiotic - so Bella has been deluding herself lo these many years. I love the start to what I think will be an excellent fic. I give it the highest rating possible. Much deserved. Sev
From the first paragraph I am pulled into your story. Your fine attention to details paints a vivid picture. The chararacterisations are richly drawn - and we have a keen sense of the dynamics between Riddle and Bellatrix. Bella's 'loyalty' to her man is blind - she takes issue with other women when it the man she is a slave to that she should take issue with - that and just how much she allows herself to be used. She allows herself to be used knowing that she is being used. A marvelous insight into her charachter. It is striking that one who can outwardly seem so strong is actually quite weak. And this weakness makes her despised by the one she adores. Love and Voldemort are not naturally symbiotic - so Bella has been deluding herself lo these many years. I love the start to what I think will be an excellent fic. I give it the highest rating possible. Much deserved. Sev
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story. I haven't read something with as much passion as this for a while. Keep up the great work and I look forward to later chapters! :)
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it! I LOVE your story. It was just the way you wrote Tom Riddle, how he didn't exactly change, but you depicted him as a human, as Dumbledore saw him to be. He still has the same beliefs, alwas will, but he learned to love.
Claudia and him still have a LONG way to go. There'll be a lot of dark times. But I feel like the story's about to end. Will there be a sequel? ::crosses figers for a sequel:: =]
But right now all I'm thinking is a hot Tom, naked and horny, and his wife. Plus ice cream.. YUM!
Come back here soon!.
Claudia and him still have a LONG way to go. There'll be a lot of dark times. But I feel like the story's about to end. Will there be a sequel? ::crosses figers for a sequel:: =]
But right now all I'm thinking is a hot Tom, naked and horny, and his wife. Plus ice cream.. YUM!
Come back here soon!.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heehee. the weird food requests. is she pregnant??? O.O
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. :D
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D i can't wait to see what Tom does at the Olmo House ... and kind of hope he doesn't flip at Claudia since it really wasn't her fault at all, and i imagine he'd be smart enough to figure that one out (but then again, such spats *do* make for dramatic influence... mrrf O_o). but yes, awaiting Chapter 20 with bells and tambourines and much rejoicing. ^_^
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is excellent
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eee! i love this fanfic (really not enough sympathetic Tom Riddle fanfic out there)! please, please, please write some more! pretty please?? @_@
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, this is quite possibly the best harry potter fanfic i\'ve read in a LONG time. updatE!!!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!!