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That was utterly charming. I've often wondered "what if"s regarding Tom Riddle experiencing love and this was about the sweetest imaginable. I like how even right from the start he did not want to hurt her.

Splendid job on the OCs too -it's always such a fine line whenever OCs are integrated into canon.

I'd be interested to see more how lives go on; how everyone reacts to Tom living as a regular wizard.

Thanks for writing.

I know I don't say it that much, but I love this story and I always feel like I can read it over and over again and always catch something new!!! Definitly one of the best HP fanfics out there, and one that everyone should read!!!!

This is such an awesome story. You need to make a sequal or I will hunt you down, for rizzle. Keep going!!

Hey! I just read the whole story tonight, I loved it. I agree with your sentiment that the same pairings over and over get a little tired, so I was glad to see you have done your own thing. 25 year old Riddle. Wow. Just Wow......!
Well done!

AHHH!!!!!

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!

so are you saying there's gonna be a sequel?

ooh la la

That was fab, Matty! I really really enjoyed it... looking forward to reading the sequel!

That was so awesome. it was so sweet and emotional in a way. If you do make a sequel, I hope it isn't full of angst. I would like to see something focused on the pregnancy and birth of their baby or OOOHHH something of their childs life. Okay rambling. Really anyways I have loved this story from the beginning. It was so great. You did such an awesome job on it.

So many great things to say about this chapter but I'm in a rush to get to the next!


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Tom was mesmerized just watching her.
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His infatuation with her is a little odd but I'm sure there's reasons why he choose her besides how beautiful and fiesty she is.


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She lost herself in the kiss, it was one of open carnal need. His tongue made love to her mouth.
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Holy cow! I'm liking Claudia and the imagery is wonderful.

yay! chapter 5!!!


ookaay..
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She preferred the elf, because whenever Tom was near her she couldn

This is easily one of the best fics I have ever read. Your characters are so richly drawn, the details so evocative... Your characters are very real; the emotions and responses quite natural. You have a gift with language that is wonderous to behold. Bella, the woman who glory days are past her - who invested so much of herself in a man that would never really want her beyond her obvious usefulness... It is great to see that Claudia, while being seduced by darkness - does not give in blindly to it. She resists it - even knowing that it is futile. Its great to see that she does have some gumption.

And as for the phenomenal intimacy - I bow to your greatness

What a splendid way to spend my New Year's Eve!

Sev