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for Beetle on the Wall

by Ami

person luvhp
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, the possibilities indeed!!!
The was, very voyeuristically H.O.T.!
Professor Granger huh? Ah, I see :)
Well done!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lookfar
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot indeed! And a nifty use of Rita and her animagus abilities. She'd have to find a little time alone after this, indeed.
person K
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i doubt hermione would ever agree to a threesome w/ rita skeeter, ick. love the hot action though.
person Angie30
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Extreamly erotic! I've read this before in your story folder on ARWOW and was so happy when I found on here. I could just imagine what Snape will do with those two woman together *Grins* ( my dirty imagination always seems to run away from me)
person LCDrusilla
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was short and sweet with just enough plot to make it a little more than random smut. Couldn't have asked for anything else to brighten my morning.
person Sulwen
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...I love dominant Severus...I love letting us believe the student/teacher thing until the end...I love the outside persective...I love this fic.
person Katie K
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... that was hot. You are continuing this, right? Please?
person Sea
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Was laughing and cringing at the same time. Great job!
person wheyz
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful... That was so hot. Excellent voyeurism. I loved it,