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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best veela stories I have read!! For your first fanfiction its very good!!
~Dreams
~Dreams
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Veela fics. :) Very interesting start!!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story thus far...
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your doing a great job writing this. Ireally like all the background info. I can\'t help but beg for longer chapters...It should be a compliment though because I don\'t want to stop reading it!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love what i\'ve read so far...but it\'s annoying to have such short chapters. obviously i understand time crunches, but please try to update more!!! i\'m eager to find out what draco will think....=D
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good start. can\'t wait to see how this turns out
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i\'m in awe. I have read veela stories before, but this one is to different. Please make hermione a beauty (beautiful), they always make her sound pretty in the other stories, but not beautiful. Make the malfoys shock of her apperance *runs hands evilly*. Malfoy would probably think that she has that same nest bird hair, in other stories that\'s what he thinks, or big teeth. lol. Please. Also, make hermione and draco not to succumb into each other to soon. Tension is so fun in my opinion. I also like lucius and this narcissa, she seems to understand everything, while, Lucius is still an arrogant man. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. Where is draco anyways? Is pansy in this story, I hope not, but it will be good,since she always get\'s dumped at the end like the pug face whore she is. lol. please continue. update soon. have a happy halloween.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the first reviewer. Don\'t let other people get make you feel bad. This is your story, not theirs. If they don\'t like it, the bollony for them, but you have othe people, who really love your story, me for example. I was one of those victims of people. I haven\'t updated a single story. They tolled me it was utter crap. I\'m writing one story know, regardless of what they think. I\'m going to post my fic, if they don\'t like it, so what, theres other people, who really appreciate a good mind. lol. Don\'t give up on this story. There are lots of people, who write veela fic\'s a never finish. DON\'T BE LIKE THEM. I READ A GOOD STORY, WHEN I SEE ONE. THIS ONE\'S ONE OF THEM. HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU. p(^.^)p HAPPY HALLOWEEN. Then same michelle from the last review.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Girl you know how much I love this fic, and you! You ROCK!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are such a tease! No wonder I love ya so much!