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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Luna!
This was yet another brilliant chapter! I loved the scene with the mirror, Draco's own reflection proved that Draco sees himself as nothing less then a smirking, condescending, arrogant, good looking young man. LoL. Just terrific! I was in a complete fit of giggles for most of the chapter.
I loved Narcissa trying to break the tension. Just brilliant. Oooh! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see how her Owl to Mrs. Granger fairs.
Keep up the excellant work.
Bek
This was yet another brilliant chapter! I loved the scene with the mirror, Draco's own reflection proved that Draco sees himself as nothing less then a smirking, condescending, arrogant, good looking young man. LoL. Just terrific! I was in a complete fit of giggles for most of the chapter.
I loved Narcissa trying to break the tension. Just brilliant. Oooh! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see how her Owl to Mrs. Granger fairs.
Keep up the excellant work.
Bek
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like it! I know this is your first so I want to give you encouragement to keep writing. I love veela stories, and I like where yours is going. Please continue when you can!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely Brilliant beginning, please update soon, have added to my favourite list,
but could you e.mail me when you update please.
Best wishes.
but could you e.mail me when you update please.
Best wishes.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must be my lucky day to find another veela fic! You are so right there aren\'t nearly enough of these. This sounds really great so far, and I\'m really looking forward to reading the rest of it!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked. Please don\'t stop, you write really well and I\'m impressed. And thank you for either being a good proofreader or having a beta reader.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again! LoL.
I\'m so glad this chapter was up for me to read before bed, I\'ve got an early start tomorrow and after such a shoddy day, I needed a lil pick me up. Another amazing chapter Luna, the interaction between Alanis and Lucius was fantastic, I could so clearly see them staring each other down; both of them wary of the other. I absolutely can not wait for chapter four. Even though Hermione and Draco haven\'t yet made their appearances, it\'s great the way you\'ve already managed to thicken the plot already. PLEASE!!! Update soon!
Bek
I\'m so glad this chapter was up for me to read before bed, I\'ve got an early start tomorrow and after such a shoddy day, I needed a lil pick me up. Another amazing chapter Luna, the interaction between Alanis and Lucius was fantastic, I could so clearly see them staring each other down; both of them wary of the other. I absolutely can not wait for chapter four. Even though Hermione and Draco haven\'t yet made their appearances, it\'s great the way you\'ve already managed to thicken the plot already. PLEASE!!! Update soon!
Bek
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I love your story, it\'s very well written and the storyline is fabulous. I LOVE Veela!Draco and there are definitely not enough stories out there. Thank You, can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting beginnings. I like how involved Narcissa and Lucius are. Update soon!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
I love seeing the more human side of Lucius, and a more three dimensional take on Narcissa. I can\'t wait for the next one to go up...
Bek
PS: Nag your Beta! LoL
I love seeing the more human side of Lucius, and a more three dimensional take on Narcissa. I can\'t wait for the next one to go up...
Bek
PS: Nag your Beta! LoL
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!! update soon