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for Souls Collide

by LunaGrrl

person zara
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to say thanks for the great reviews...and to remind you that you promised a new chapter....SOON. ^__^I'm still waiting......
person zara
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story when I first read it some time ago. So wwhen I saw the repost, I read it again...hoping that it\'s gone a bit further...:) Please hurry your beta up. I\'d love to read the next chapter as soon as possible........
person LunaGrrl
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I should also mention that I had a computer crash a short time ago that also helped in the delay of the story. I promise you my loyal followers that I will have something for you very soon even if I have to find another beta for it to happen. I really am sorry for the inconvience!!!

~Luna ^__^
person carina
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello Luna!
I just found your fan fiction and I must say I love it. I like your style of writing and the plot itself. Unfortunately there are so few fan fictions with the theme Veela and the consequences of being one, especially good ones as yours. I hope your beta will settle in fast, so that you can upload another chapter. I am looking forward to what will happen to Hermione and Draco.

Ps. please excuse grammar mistakes and spelling errors. You see, I am not a native speaker of English and I am still learning to get better.

Until your next chapter
Take care
Carina
person zara
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, it\'s me again...just wanted to say that I read your review( I do think it was yours...or there are more Luna\'s out there) And I\'m glad you like my fic. The next chapter is finshed and sent to my beta, so it should be published tomorrow...probably.^__^anyway, thanks for your kind words...and once again...do hurry up with posting new chapter. i love veela fics
person Bek Allen
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Luna this was a wonderful chapter! From Narcissa's frustration over her letter, right down to Crookshanks. I loved the way you've made it so that it's not some upper-class snob lowering themselves to speak with a commoner, but a mum speaking to another mum. Above all else, mothers and fathers relate to each other that blurs all lines of class and creed. Very well done.

I especially like the way Hermione had a bit of a paddy over the fact that the letter was from 'That vile woman'. LoL. As a teacher, I've found it more often then not, the kids with the biggest opinions of someone, normally have to be knocked down a peg or two to realise how much of a hypocrite they're being, and you've done this with Hermione. Giving her the time to think and reflect on how two-faced she was being about second chances, made her realize that, her initial thoughts about "letting the ferret up and die", were wrong, even for Draco.

More importantly, I loved Crookshanks. He is definitely a wonder. And I totally know what Hermione was going on about, talking to her cat. I have a cat and two dogs, and often talk to my golden lab if I'm having a bad day. There is just something in a pet's eyes (any pet, be it Huski, tabby, labrador or part-kneazel), that gives this impression that they truly are listening. I think that's why pets are known to be great for stress relief.

I cannot wait until you update again. I really do enjoy this fic and can't wait to see where it goes. And, as Crookshanks said... Harry and Ron will get over it eventually.

Bek
person Stacy
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it i need an update. and an owl.
person dawn
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so thrilled to see another chapter this morning! I can't wait to read about the dinner, Hermione finding out is always the best part.
person anon
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay I hardly ever review cause I'm lazy, but I LOVED IT!!!!! Definitely can't wait to read more. Especially since it's a Veela story. Veela!Draco (with Hermione as his mate of course) are my favorite stories and there really arent' enough of them around.