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for The Defection of the Vindictive

by FaireWeather

person Earendel
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo.
person larken
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like you story but I have to point out one grammer error. The past tense of drag is dragged. Drug when used as a verb means to give someone a dose of medicine(or potion) and usually implies non-con. It\'s a common error, but if you check the dictionary (I checked Webster, Oxford and the Dictionary of American Slang) it just is not an acceptable usage. That being said I will watch for your updates - good start.