AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for More Than Expected

by awalter

schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just from my point of view, I don't like Draco. To me he is not worthy of Hermoine's body. If you are basing H/Hr as not having any feelings for each other,on canon, then you certainly can't put Hermoine with Draco.

Canon depicts him as a pureblooded bigot. He wouldn't have anything to do with her. As for Hermoine, based on canon I feel if she had to mate with Draco, she would let him die beause of his abuse to her.

Other than that it was an interesting story. Just one of my favorites, due to not liking D/Hr pairings. I usually wont read any of them.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What happened? How did they go from fighting to having sex? Please update this story.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing this. It's one of the best short stories of this genre (veela), and I think I've read them all.
person Katay
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and perhaps Draco was more experienced and could ... ahem ... achieve more patience with the situation :P? Love the idea - I have no clue why I read the same plot lines over either, but every single one has a unique twist, so I suppose it makes it worth it in the end ... now we won't go into actually discussing the whole psychosis of the genre ... buuuuuut I love it and you've got some great ideas going, so I can't wait to see whats next!
person Darrien Roberts
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually Harry and Hermione ARE attracted to each other in THE Harry Potter Universe. Believe me the Evidence is all there. People are just two blinded by HBP to realise how different the whole book is to the others. And believe me OotP is the best source for H/Hr Evidence. You just have to read between the lines, and not allow yourself to be blinded by HBP.

Great Story though, love the angle you've put in.
person LaLa
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love VEELA fics. Great story!
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man this story rocks i love three-way fics and h/hr/d is my favorite please update soon!!!!!!
person kazfeist
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. Now, on with the plot! Would appreciate emails when the next chapter is up....
person cherie
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Draco and Harry Veela stories. So far so good, I like it.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love these kinds of stories and I really like this one- I just felt like there was a big chunk missing in the middle. I\'d love to read what happened between Dumbledore\'s office and the bedroom. Good job though!!!