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Maela and other readers: Killing Odessa was the most merciful way to end her pain. Even if she got help, she would have either wound up in Azkaban for the rest of her life or St. Mungo\'s in the psycho ward, again for the rest of her life. And that was just too sad to think of. She was too twisted to find love...so I agreed with Marcus. Death was kinder. And as for Hermione feeling guilt, after seeing the pensieve, even after her abuse, she also saw the way Odessa disposed of the men she killed. Odessa had no remorse. She was actually a serial killer, even if her animagus took over. She could have turned herself, but didn\'t. Hermione killing Odessa was like killing Draco. Something she had to do, or possibly die herself. Plus, Odessa planned on committing suicide anyway. So I didn\'t let her feel any great guilt about it.

That was so sweet! I loved it!!!!! Ok, I can\'t wait to read Marcus\'s adventure! That should be exciting! I\'d like to hear about him some more! Oooooooooo........... so are we gonna get a short story about Snape and Hermys child too? Oh I hope its a girl!!!! Snape needs to have a little girl!!! That\'d be so excellent!!! Wow...... this was an awesome story! I can\'t wait for more from you!!! You are just brilliant, fantastic.... wonderful!!! Please... a story about their child would be so sweet! I can\'t wait! Thanks for everything and all the nights of loveliness I spent reading your stories! I think you are going to just write forever, hahahhaha..... we won\'t ever let you stop! hahahahhaa! Best of luck in everything! Toodles!

And that is a rather wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I must admit though I shall miss your Severus and Hermione. Hopefully you will be able to work them into another story. I wondered if you knew when you began your first story that you would be developing a series with them?

I chuckled a bit with the thoughts of you sitting with your screaming grandchild while you wrote the epilogue. I think perhaps it was when the child was sleeping quietly on your lap that you wrote this part of your story. They look so sweet sleeping, you forget the squalling. I think a child will be perfect for the duo with all the craziness a child brings with her/him.

Once again thank you so much for bringing such pleasure to our lives with your stories. I am heading out to check out Tonks and Kingsley. Bye for now.

Yet another amazing story. Such a sad ending to Odessa though. I was hoping that she\'d be able to find happiness, and not just a peaceful if violent death. But, I guess it was the only way to ease the poor woman\'s suffering. As for Hermione and Severus...I cant wait to see their child.

Red

Chapters 30 & 31 - Wonderful as always! Looking forward to your next story. Marcus and Cassandra are going to need lemons though as you have teased us long enough with them.

Keep up the great work!

Yay! They are going to start a family! :) Seriously...I can imagine a really happy Eli. hehe

yes, that was great. i was so glad to see the chapters loaded at fantastically fast rate. i enjoyed the story tremendously. i have to say that marcus really got what he deserved from odessa, he can be such a jackass at times. who do you generally invision marcus to look like. i know when i right i usually have someone in mind.

severus was wonderful. their transformations were great and i was hoping that his snake form would be rather large. it just wouldn\'t work if it was a regular size snake. although he was more like an anaconda, with his size and all.

i\'m looking for to your next installment of severus and hermoine snape. with her pregnant it ought to be a great hoot.

cyprus

Jeez i now i will now sit befor my screen and refresh every 3 seconds till the next part is up.
You now that you are EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can

This is really good! Love all your chapters in this story! Poor Severus indeed. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Hmmmmmm.... more please?