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for #8 ~ A Rather Catty Situation

by Ms_Figg

person firewall
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, the body of her uncle with his genitals bitten off and torn body, eh? Sounds to me like Odessa is an animagnus as well. A panther perhaps? black hair, green eyes...oh yes, this is going to be a good one.
person droxy
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
odessa seems like a female Marcus
person angel
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man she on more thing wrong with her then marcus ... i cant wait in till next chapter so in tillten keep up teh awesoem work and later for now

angel
person tak
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dumbledore getting the hots for odessa hey? interesting to see how this will affect the patriarch of the wizarding world. (reducing him to a steaming puddle of hormones certainly would be a literary challenge!)
for some inexplicable reason, i really want odessa to succeed (just a teensy-tiny bit) before being horribly shot down in flames. -maybe a stolen kiss? using polyjuice to be hermoine? ah...the possibilities.
person JTBJAB
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter - poor Severus having to tolerate Miss Divine without his sarcasm to help him! Bless!

Please update asap!
person kishkitten
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Odessa may be beautiful but there has to be something else about her that is causing all the males to react to her. Either hormones, pheramones, a potion or a combination of all three. Perhaps even a spell/curse that was cast on her without her knowledge when she was younger. If even Albus is getting wood over her and no other male can resist her, then she\'ll get exactly what she wants with little effort, no matter how devoted and disciplined Sev is....
person glenn
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mis Fig you are my hero, i just end reading the ghost and now i find 6 chapters from a new story, really!!! this chapter was really funny, i can
person Hypatia
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms Figg-

Although I love your story so far, as I love all your stories, your constant readers are a bit unclear as to why this beautiful woman stalks, seeks and loves Snape from afar. He doesn\'t have any reputation for charm, tenderness, etc. He\'s no Lockhart.

Let us not forget canon here. Snape is not physically beautiful, unless you get to know him and overlook several faults, as Hermione has done. I would be more willing to be enthused about stories where wizards (and not just Marcus) vie for the young and brilliant Hermione, rather than beautiful witches lusting after Severus.

If your story is already plotted, however, I\'m willing to overlook my objections in lieu of satisfactory lemons, smut, etc. Maybe Odessa could end up with Marcus. Or Filch!!!! Hey, we\'ve not seen any stories about squibs--------(aarrgghhhhh!@!!! choking!!!!!!Help me, somebody!!!!!....mmmmpphhhhhh.....Never mind...........Carry on, Ms. Figg!!!!!!)

person Ms_Figg
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ANON: Wasn\'t sure about lions purring. Went to Discovery and Learning Site (www.zoo.org.au/education/faqdocs/mammal/lion_purr.htm) and found this answer:

Do lions purr?
Lions do purr. Generally small cats purr when they inhale and exhale and big cats (such as lions) can purr when they breathe out or exhale.

But inversely, I found a couple of sites that say they don\'t. This lioness does however . Thanks for the review
person BellissimaSari
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I read your previous one as well, and I\'m SOOO very glad that you\'ve decided to continue this story line! Post more soon!!

~Sari