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oh poor Snape going through all the guilt. SO I assume there is going to be a brawl between odessa and hermione ala marcus and severus.

argh, how can you leave it like this. it might not be an evil cliffie, but it\'s a cliffie all the same!
poor filtch, maybe he could help ms. divine find her way? -she seems to like cantankerous, so he definitely fits the bill.

so many great chapters in so little time. *sigh* if only i could write like that...infinitely jealous of your talent.

keep it up.

Ch 8 - ah, so Mrs. Norris likes Odessa? Hmm..... I wonder if Odessa will try to make friends at Hogwarts as allies in her scheme to get Severus, or if she\'ll just try to catch him by herself. Bad thing for Odessa is that Severus - in order to BE an \"ideal man\" - must be faithful to his wife, or else he wouldn\'t be \"ideal\". Unless Odessa plans to kill off Hermione and then \"comfort\" the grieving widower Severus? I do feel sorry for Odessa being incested by her uncle, but Severus and Hermione had nothing to do with it. If Odessa is an Animagus, I hope her form can be eaten by a lioness, python, or at least by a dragon! Thanks for posting.

For those who might be interested, I have my ideal image of Severus, as well as two sexy pics I made myself located at theburningpen.com, a site I am very slowly working on. This is the Snape I envision when I write, and he\'s a hottie. Over 18 only please. Thanks

this chapter certainly left me grinning...it\'s good to see marcus still has a spine (albeit an evil one) to call his own.
love the way this one\'s playing out.

Ch 9 - oh, no, Dumbledore is being bamboozled by Odessa! Marcus to the rescue! (Hmm, will Cassandra make an appearance in this fic? Just hoping...) I wonder if Odessa fools only men, or women too.

giggle. I love Marcus now.

oh i can\'t wait to see what Severus\' reaction when he see Odessa! You make her look like a very beatiful but wicked woman! wiii!

Mmmmhumm, chowing down raw steak, wanting to claw Marcus\'s face. Oh yeaah, she\'s a catty lady. And just when I am feeling somewhat charitable to Marcus, he has to act like a twit. Grrrr! LOL At least he keeps things moving. Looking forward to more fasciniating reading. Same cat time, same cat channel.

Oooh *jumps up and down* Hermione silly girl! And Marcus you pig! Grrrr! I look forward to the next update!