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for #8 ~ A Rather Catty Situation

by Ms_Figg

person Stormi
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two - I never though Minerva would be shy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Stormi
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three - I hope Hermoine doesn\'t bit off more than she can chew. Watch out Severus!
person JW
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - \"sleek black cat\" - a panther?? I hope lioness-Hermione takes her on, but Hermione won\'t ndecessarily know it\'s Odessa in animal form, while Odessa will know the lion is Hermione. BTW, I think an Animagus can transform with their clothes on; McGonagall transforms to and from her cat form with her robes on, although perhaps Hermione and Odessa find it more sensual to be unclothed when transforming. Thanks for updating!
person Stormi
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 - Oh my!
person JW
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - eeps! Hmm, can the house elves clean Odessa\'s \"Snape Room\" and tell someone about it? Can Cassandra tell if Marcus\' life is in danger? Scary! And if Odessa thinks Severus isn\'t an \"animal,\" what would happen if she saw Severus and Hermione playing one of their \"games\" like Marcus saw in the Forest? Does Hermione still have the charm bracelet - with the flame, etc.? I do hope Marcus doesn\'t fall asleep after - ahem - cuddling with Odessa, as I wouldn\'t trust her!
person lovethelab
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, she is quite a character! And are you going to help Albus and his extra \"spurt\" of hormones from watching Odessa?? I can\'t wait to see what Marcus thinks of her - - will he tell Hermione she is after Severus??
person JTBJAB
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....I can\'t wait to see Marcus\' reaction to her!
person JW
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10 - no, no, no! Please don\'t let Marcus turn into just another idjit male, willing to do anything for Odessa! Marcus needs to treat Odessa like Alastar! Doesn\'t Marcus still have his Eradicator senses, telling him that she is trouble? Ooh, Cassandra needs to turn him into a zombie for a while, teach Marcus a lesson. Maybe Endora should help keep an eye on Marcus. Re Odessa\'s thing for raw meat - is she an Animagus leopard or tiger? or a vulture?
person Koda
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t Odessa instead be involved in a fatal threstal incident? Ramaging hippogriffs? Or, fuck, she just needs to diiie. Crazy husband stealing bitch. At least Marcus was a little more sane than her, even if he was a wife-stealing.. guy. I don\'t mind Marcus that much anymore.
person angel
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man marcus ... you are some thing... please more and in till next time later

angel