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Don\'t let Marcus die. :o And, great chapter.

Ch.14 - WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Gosh, that wasn\'t just a lemon.... it was lemonade! YUM!!! Oh how I love lemonade! muahahahahahaha! Ahem, anyways..... that Odessa is rather creepy and snake-like herself! URGH! I can\'t stand her already! Just like with Marcus, though I dislike her even more! She\'s borderline psychotic, freako, insane, loony, just woah! But that is soooo perfect, because you are makin us readers feel what we should feel in order to understand the story. So kudos to you! GAH! Is she like the distant relative of a Skeeter and an Umbridge or something? Perhaps a Malfoy and a Lestrange also? BLAH! Ah yes, \"devine\" indeed! HA! Well excellent as always deary! Loving it as usual! Toodles!

I hope Severus is worried about why Hermione doesn\'t join him for breakfast! If not he is a bad man! Lol! And as much as I sorta hated Marcus before... I hope he doesn\'t get hurt... too much!

Hmmm, what is Odessa\'s secret? Sounds like Marcus will get more than he bargained for...
I can\'t wait to see Hermione\'s Lioness tear Odessa\'s black cat to shreds! Crazy beotch.
Is Hermione pale and sick to her stomach simply because of the confrontation? Or is there another reason???
Love this story- superbly written- hope to see more soon, MsFigg. :)

Ch 15 - yikes! Cassandra isn\'t even going to warn Marcus? So what happens to Odessa if she climaxes - she turns into a cannibal-cat or something? And what kind of info will Marcus tell Odessa - will he tell her about the time he saw S&H have sex? Will he offer to duplicate that experience for her? I do hope Hermione tells Severus about Odessa and the plane. Go back to your keyboard and write the next chapter!! Please???

man marcus dont do it back out now .... i know yu hate mione and snape but odessa is carzy please dont do it .... well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

I had a thought as I read this chapter - if she tries to bite it off, can he shrink it to a really small unfidable size, as well as massive? ;D I\'ve been following this series of stories since you began, and your style has really improved in such a short time - yet more reason to keep me coming back for more.

Chapter 15 - Oh wow is Marcus ever going to be in trouble. Good thing Cassandra is so patient with him. I hope that Hermione wacks Odessa but good, without the getting fired part.

Man! You\'re great! WOOOHOO!

*yay* so many great chapters to read. i wonder how severus will react when hermione tells him odessa is after him? can\'t wait for the next installment.