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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I think there is a little more behind Odessa\'s little black cat...another worry. BUT I really don\'t think Hermione needs to worry about Severus...nope, nope, not at all. He didn\'t need to face his greatest fear in the last story because he already knew what it was and rather than become overwhelmed by it, reacted proactively by ensuring her protection.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter, the story in moving, i really hope marcus has something hard ahead, he is a bastard and deserves it, I can wait to see how severus is going to handle this situation... update soon!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see a cat fight in the near future.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - poor Severus, having a bed full of lioness fur! Heh-heh! As for Odessa - she\'s just a regular kitty-cat cat??? But was able to bite off her uncle\'s bits? And what kind of \"instructions\" would she give Marcus - he\'s not the kind of guy to take to instructions very well. No, he\'d be in real trouble with her, especially if he brags to her about being part-dragon. You sure it\'s not time for Cassandra to step in with a warning to him? Zombie-Odessa could chop wood on the island.... Thanks for updating!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W.O.W.!!! okay you sure know how to write them! I know it is your story, but could i ask/suggest something? an all out \"cat\" fight would be fun especally if a certain \"snake\" has to step in. ;) DON\'T FEEL OBLIGATED TO DO SO I JUST THAUGHT THAT IT WOULD BE FUN TO SEE WITH YOUR WRITTING STYLE!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor hermione, and i do hope marcus gets his just desserts....hehe
i hope hermione tells severus her fears
i hope hermione tells severus her fears
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.13 - Excellent! just one thing tho..... witches or wizards don\'t need to be free of their clothes to transform. I\'m not certain why you have them taking off their clothes, because they don\'t need to, to transform. Anyways, it is kinda sexy I guess. Ah well. 2 cats, eh? Interesting. So is Odessa like a super kitty or something? hahaha! hmmmm..... can\'t wait to find out. Toodles!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
faint. That was good. As always.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very curious, next chapters should be interesting.
so glad SS and HG-S had that chat.
so glad SS and HG-S had that chat.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
marcus she is not worth you time you can do alot better then her ..... please more and cant wait to read what till happen next .. in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now
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