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Chapter 16 - Marcus is in trouble and Hermione better watch Odessa!

Ch 18 - ooh, I wonder if Severus and Hermione will notice Odessa and Marcus talking at breakfast, and whether Hermione (fresh from a transformation) will be able to smell Odessa and figure out she is the \"cat\" smell on Marcus and her door. Odessa is supposed to be a good research person with a head for details, but she hasn\'t studied much about Animagus transformation - she should! Perhaps she is just so paranoid about being caught as an Animagus that she won\'t even touch a book about the subject. Paranoid.... yup, that\'s Odessa. I\'m glad Hermione and Severus helped Marcus; now, they have an idea about the size of Odessa\'s claws, even if they don\'t yet know it\'s her. Go, Marcus! Confront that \"cat\" woman!

you saved the naked transformation situation remarkably well.
cheers.

Ch 16 - drat! Where\'s Eli when you need him! and Leaf Ear! Elves must talk to each other, right? Or to Dumbledore, since the Hogwarts elves work for him? Doesn\'t Dumbledore know anything that\'s going on? Eeps! Will anyone find Marcus\' body when Odessa gets through with him??

WOW...that about sums your story up...i love every one bit of it...the way you keep Severus in character... and Hermione who\'s becoming quiet a lioness...and the Odessa woman, i wouldn\'t want her near my man(\",)

Keep up the good work, love the way your writing just flows when i read it, not many people have the gift. Looking forward to the next chapter...hmmm that\'s for you to know and for me to read ;o)

I\'m keeping watch on my computer for the update

Greetzz

i love all of your stories. i also love how frequently you update! marcus is in for it, isn\'t he? i can\'t wait for the big cat fight \'tween hermione and odessa, i just hope severus gets some vengence of his own. great job!

Hermione is way too insecure at the moment. Perhaps opening a connection detailing Snape\'s past genital entanglements with Bella and Narcissa might help, but....perhaps she needs a \"girls\' night\" poker game with Ginny and Minerva, Tonks, etc. She\'s too much of an asset to let this bimbo get to her!!!

Barring that, go Marcus!!!!

(And your excellent obeah woman, Ms. Figg. -- is perhaps the most honorable, worthy and least pathetic of all)

Please pardon my oversight. I was....you know....engaged in urgent business with Lord Voldemort.

Just wanted to thank you for the wonderful lemons which you manage to cast anew at the feet of your worthless servants, making us feel all ---inadequate.

Great job, once again.

Ch.10 - I HATE HER ALREADY!!!!! Excellent!!!!! And Marcus is typical Marcus, but I like him anyways for that... tisk tisk..... oh Marcus, will you ever learn? ah well! This should be an exciting ride!!! woooooooo! Oh dear... I hope Hermione\'s worst fear doesn\'t come true! That would be completely horrible!! They would split up and never be together again, it just couldn\'t be if he had sex with another woman.... unless he was forced or drugged or something, but even then..... ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! It\'s just too horrible to think about! Wow..... this will be awesome! Toodles!

Oh boy, if I have interpreted the clues you\'ve laid down in the story correctly, then Marcus is really taking a big chance and will need the help from his ancestors. I\'m keeping my fingers crossed for him. Great chapters as usual.