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OMG. We\'re on Chapter 16 already!!! You write the best lemony goodness. Thank you again for the quick updates. I adore Marcus and hope that you continue to include him in your stories. He is a great original character.

It\'s about time someone wrote a jealous mature Hermione. Most writers who\'ve written jealous Hermione, portray her as being under twenty and jealous for one week, due to her immaturity. It\'s nice to see Snape desired and pursued and Hermione jealous because she\'s in love with him and possessive.

I kinda feel bad for Odessa. You\'ve been dropping bits and pieces of her background, and it sounds miserable. However, at one point, you have leave your past behind and live life to the fullest, without being bug-on crazy. Going after another woman\'s man is always a dumb idea. Can\'t wait to see how she deals with the real Severus Snape. Not the one she\'s fashioned from her delusions. And hey, what was in that bag? LOL.

The sex scene was alright. Odessa is almost cool. She\'s got a few issues, but she\'s still pretty cool. And damn, poor Marcus. Yeah, he really needs to stay away from that chick for awhile. Damn. But still, I bet Marcus won\'t tell.

Ch 17 - I knew she should\'ve told him that \"something bad\" happens if she climaxes due to her body chemistry or something. Well, I wonder if anyone will come looking for Marcus - I don\'t think those bottles of potions will be enough, as those injuries sound wicked. And Odessa isn\'t just a kitty-cat, is she - a panther? Poor house elves.... Too bad Marcus couldn\'t turn into a dragon, but he\'s not a registered Animagus either, I bet. Scary! Thanks for posting.

i love your stories MrsFigg i have read them all and am dying to find out how this one ends please i would like it alot if you could email me once its done you have a graet story telling ability Sad MArcus got hurt i love him

Lions, dragons, and snakes- oh, my!!! All these animal lusts are really hot! Hmmm... I agree Odessa sounds like a tough one, but is she really ready to tangle with a pissed-off lioness? Hah! I can\'t wait for the fur to fly in this cat fight! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
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Killer K :}

Ok, Hate Odessa...still like Marcus even if he is an ass. Don\'t ask me why, I just do. Another great chapter in this amazing 8 part(thus far) epic. Really well done. I just keep hoping Cassandra shows up and kicks the Hell Cat\'s ass. Please Please Please??!! LOL. Thanks for the many updates.

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Yep... he really does need to practise safe sex! Lol! Jeez, and I bet he\'s not going to report it - I hope he at least tells Hermione or Severus or even Albus!!!! But somebody! I look forward to your next chapter!