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Hiya Ms_Figg! *waves* Missed me through this one? *lol* I stopped in from time to time, but I finally caught up on everything! Yeah! I got to read it in large chuncks this time instead of chapter by chapter! (Sorry...had people in from out of town, illness....) Anyhoo, this was wonderful. As always your writing is impecable. Your story lines amazing and your characterization is flawless. I loved this crazy Oeaas. But I must say, Marcus stood front and center in this one for me. I was able to identify with him the most and cheer for his redemption this time instead of Severus\'. Oh...and I am reading the Cassandra/Marcus one now.

ah yes a much better ending!~

Another great story! Any plans on another about the pregnancy?

Awesome story. Thank you!!

I\'ve just finished yet another of your wonderful stories, and I\'m still amazed by the quality of your work, as well as the speed in which you update! Well done for another excellent tale. Hoping for more advancement between Marcus and Cassandra!

You can\'t be serious that this is over - there is still so much you can write about! Yes there is the whole Marcus thing... but then there is also Hermione being pregnant - I can imagine her being a right bitch when preggers... lol... and then when the kid is old enough to walk... it could get into so much trouble of its own! - Can you tell I love your writing? Cause I do very much so!

This was brilliant... and I\'m glad Miss Divine is gone as a threat... at least she died with dignity, over the way she was going to kill herself! Not that she really deserved that much dignity, because she was ill... but still... well done!

That was just brilliant AGAIN! I actually felt sick to my stomach thinking that Severus would betray Hermione with Odessa. I felt just like I would feel if it were my own husband about to cheat on me. Thank god I have never had to deal with that! Anyway time for a new story, I need something to occupy me when hubby is at work and my girls are at school. Love your writing, keep up the good work.
Toodles.

poor sick odessa, too bad you didnt have a closeing cahpter on the events, and a caht between SS and HG.

Bravo! **Clapping, standing ovation**
That was really well done. I\'m so glad she wasn\'t able to finish what she started w/ Severus! Whew! It was a close one, tho. I\'m glad she\'s dead- on with Marcus and Cassandra.

Then, perhaps, the next Severus/Hermione tale where she\'s pregnant and they encounter.....??

I have faith in your imaginative writing abilities! Whatever you write- I\'ll be reading it. Thanks!

L.

Ch31 - well, now I\'m all curious what Albus is sending to Cassandra, and how they know each other. I think Marcus will get \"punished\" by Cassandra (hopefully not turned into a zombie) with a good talking-to, and look forward to that ficlet. I have to admit that the more of Odessa\'s background you wrote (her history of being abused), the more I felt sorry for her, but it wasn\'t the same as with Marcus. As you said, Marcus never killed except as part of his job, or in an arranged duel; he had boundaries. Odessa would\'ve ended up killing Severus too, as just by seducing him, she would\'ve turned him into an adulterer - like the Auror she killed (the one who was secretly married). BTW, whenever I glance at the photo of you, I can\'t help thinking that you look way too young to have a screaming grandchild!