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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.20 - Oh dammit Marcus!!! You are giving her more motivation! gah! Well, I suppose his intentions were somewhat good. I do, however, love that comment he made about Snape and Hermione being two people with one soul. That was sooooooo sweet! Definite brownie points for that, hehehehehehehe! Anyway..... great.... now Odessa knows that they are Animgui too, drat! This should be interesting! Oh man.... Snape as a giant snake.... mmmmmmmm!!!!!!! That is so uberly sexy it gives me the wobbles just thinking about it! YUM!!!! He can slither over me anytime... oops! Did I just say that out loud? Oh well.... anyways..... can\'t wait for more. MAn o man, this Odessa is a really twisted twit! sheesh! She\'s gonna end up dead or worse if she goes too far! good grief! Ah well... thts her own damn fault, muahahahahhaa! I can\'t wait to see Hermione and Odessa battle it out in cat form! ME-OW! Oh dear...... I hope Snape doesn\'t fuck her, no matter what happens! I don\'t care if he is drugged, cursed, whatever.... it is unacceptable!!! ahhhhhh! no no no!!! it cannot happen! nooooooo! *cries sobs howls faints* Well, update soon, hehehehe! Toodles!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.18 - Wow! What happened? This is really interesting! Ok, so I imagine Odessa is some kind of Animagus, but not quite. Does she have an ancestral bloodline like Marcus where she has some other power or animal bloodline? I imagine her animagus form is a little black cat, but possibly she has some curse or blood within her that can transform her into a panther of some sort... possibly that she was born with or had aquired somehow? Hmmm.... this could be really interesting. Explains her desire for raw meat, ewww! And the House Elves know it too. Maybe Hermione will talk to them about it, after she does her usual searching through the books. Wow.... I really can\'t wait to see how this will turn out! Excellent, just excellent! Toodles!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 - She is a BIG KITTY! Marcus really should have listened to her. Keep up the great work.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess Odessa isn\'t *quite* as twisted as I thought. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. <3
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18 - Nice chapter. Marcus is smarter than that. He should be able to put 2 and 2 together and come up with 4. Now the question is whether he will tell the Snapes or not. Hurry and write more soon!, please.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really hope Marcus does tell Hermione... I mean yeah, she did save his life, but then he also saved hers... but then there is the whole he was gonna rape her thing, soooo....hmmmm.... I refuse to call Miss Divine by her first name cause I don\'t think she deserves it! At all... crazy or not... and everything shes been through and all... I empathise, but still... you don\'t just go around doing that... jeez!
I look forward to your next chapter to see what info Marcus gives Miss Divine and if he tells Hermione anything... but then that might be another chapter... either way - please update asap!
I look forward to your next chapter to see what info Marcus gives Miss Divine and if he tells Hermione anything... but then that might be another chapter... either way - please update asap!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay.... well that was a trip and a half. Are you really going to have Marcus tell her everything after what they-Hermione and Severus- went through and after Hermione just helped him not to die?
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like insanity runs in Odessa\'s family. Well I got the big cat idea but I really didn\'t imagine the rest of it. As usual an intriguing story, Ms. Figg. Thank you for sharing it.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great, very interesting how she can\'t control her animagus form after the act, -nice twist.
one beta thingy:
\'Thank the gods he acquired several flasks of it, the rest meant for use in class. He opened the first one and swallowed it down. It brought some relief. He went through all eight flasks. Exhausted and drugged, he passed out.\'
seven or eight?
love your work.
one beta thingy:
\'Thank the gods he acquired several flasks of it, the rest meant for use in class. He opened the first one and swallowed it down. It brought some relief. He went through all eight flasks. Exhausted and drugged, he passed out.\'
seven or eight?
love your work.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg .... as usual you are doing a fantastic job on this story. I love that Hermione\'s not scared anymore, just thoroughly pissed. I think SHE needs some reassurance sex right now. *hint,hint* Lemons.