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Hmmm, Severus\' animagus-snake could swallow 3 men, was it? I bet he could handle Odessa then...

I don\'t understand why Marcus isn\'t telling someone that the new hire is a nutjob murderer! (Tho that would take the steam out of the story, huh?) :-p

As always- can\'t wait for more!

Btw, I thought the way you handled the naked transformation was brilliant, it also took Odessa down a few pegs. What else did she miss out on by not attending a wizarding school, hmm?

Ch 20 - GROAN.... Don\'t Severus and Hermione remember about Foe Mirrors and Sneakoscopes? They don\'t realize their conversation can be overheard with Odessa as their next-door neighbor?? Now they\'re going to play lion and python while a black cat runs around - a cat that is much smaller than a lion or python, just as quick if not quicker, smaller, and can climb trees. I suppose Marcus thinks he did S&H a favor, as he did try to discourage Odessa. And does Hermione still have those charms she used against Draco?? One ball of flame, please - toasted kitty-cat!

chapt 19- this almost makes me empathize with Odessa, almost...
I think Marcus is totally nuts. I keep thinking ppor Cassandra, but I know Cassandra is stronger than that. I do hope we see Endora again :> if only briefly.

I love these OC rivals.

Marcus is a complete idiot. HG heals him and he gives her the goods, totally nihilistic this one is.

Can\'t wait to see the Snake and the Lion run free.

Yay I like where this is going. I hope Casandara reamins strong for Marcus\' sake.

Yeah you cleaned up the whole naked transformation thing well ;p Dude, Miss Divine is more twisted than I thought - I mean jeez, she could have been at least a little discouraged... sigh... but she is insane so that really is why... and now I\'m rambling... so I will just add \"Please update soon!\"

Chapter 21 - That was so tender. More soon please.

Why do you always have to stop right were it gets good? Did you take lessons from J K Rowling herself? okay now please don\'t take too long writing the next chapters!
love Citten

wow...so it seems that everyone will be out on the prowl tonight. i hope the forbidden forest is big enough for the four of them,lol.

Well this could be a bit of a zoo tonight...a snake, a dragon, and 2 kitties all on the prowl on Hogwarts\' grounds. This could be really interesting.