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for #8 ~ A Rather Catty Situation

by Ms_Figg

person larissa
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love the way you\'re making Odessa\'s character so complex. It\'s getting harder to completely hate her, more like pity her. Keep the chapters coming!
person angel
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope marcus will help is some thin dose go down ... please more .....

angel
person PurestBlood
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! WOW what a story you came up with!!! Keep up the great work!!! UPDATE ASAP!! :D
person glenn
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! i liked this one is great. I just want to ask why dumbledore doesn
person JW
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 21 - hmm, definitely time for Cassanda to re-think how she deals with Marcus. She\'s right, he IS trying his best - and who better to teach him than Cassandra or his parents? I\'m glad he\'s going out to the Forest tonight; with his eyesight, he\'ll be able to see a black cat better than Severus and Hermione. And I\'m glad he\'s thinking more about his parents; perhaps Cassandra can take him into the plane to talk with them?? Poor guy. Thanks for the new chapter!!
person Marlina
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.. I wonder if Marcus will meet Severus and Hermione and of course Odessa animagi form tonight... *grin*
person JTBJAB
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope he does tell them! This chapter was great - you are really adding depth to Marcus\' character!
person angel
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i how he does tell them ... please more soon i love it .. in till next time keep up the awesome work and later

angel
person SteffieSnape
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.21 - Interesting views by Marcus and Cassandra. I think MArcus needs a bit more time, and then maybe he\'ll finally realize what he wants. I don\'t think Cassandra should give in too easilt just yet, but maybe she can soften a little. I suppose Marcus has put forth a lot of affort already, which is good. Oooooo and tonight?! Oh dear..... I can just imagine it now.... Marcus walking along, Odessa sees him, maybe she gets so angry she transforms into a beast and goes after him, then maybe the other 2 animgi see and try to intervene. Hmmmmm...... I dunno, that was just my first thought, hahaha! Prolly won\'t happen, but ah well. I can\'t wait to see Severus the Snake slither around beneath the moon with his lioness lover! woooooooo!!!! This should be awesome. I really hope Marcus finds it within himself that\'s it\'s the right thing to do to warn Snape and Hermione. Seriously, Dragon man, the spirits will be pleased if you do, yes? muahahahahaha.... I can\'t wait for more!!!! Update soon, Toodles!
person angel
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will know we know odessa is thick.. i cant wait please more .. in till next time later

angel