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awe the part with ss and HG and the patch was lovely fluff

Oh this is so good! It seems like we\'re online at the same time lately--I\'ll read a chapter and when I go back, another is up! I can\'t wait for Severus\' reaction to his shrine, lol! I\'m guessing a trap may be coming...Sev pretending to want Odessa so they can nab her. \'Course they could just call the Aurors....
Can\'t wait for more!
L

P.S. 90 feet long??? Dayum....

Ch.24 - WOOOOOO! ACTION!!!!! Wow..... I hope we get another kitty fight soon!!!! It will be sooooooooo awesome!!!! I\'m glad Marcus decided to intervene, good for him! Good boy good boy!!! hahahahahaha! That was very satisfying, though I\'d love for Hermione to really clas some fur! muahahahahaha!!! Mon o mon!!! Can\'t wait for more!!!! Ooooooooo is Hermione ever going to be livid when she finds out about Odessa being an unregistered Animagi and an old shape shifter! wooooo!! She\'ll send her off to Azkaban for sure, if she doesn\'t kill her first or Odessa doesn\'t die or kill her own self. Can\'t wait!!!! Toodles!

Ch 23-24 - ack, Marcus hesitated by thinking too long! But he was just in time, and even if he promised Odessa he wouldn\'t tell her secret, Hermione should be able to identify Odessa\'s scent now. Lovely to see Severus\' Animagus form! He is a lot bigger than an ordinary python - the better to eat Odessa, although I don\'t think he\'d do it. I think. So Marcus doesn\'t think the Forbidden Forest is scary enough - obviously, Hagrid needs to introduce him to Aragog and Aragog\'s kids, and Hermione needs to tell him about what a herd of centaurs can do. Hmmm.... or perhaps Odessa can discover Aragog and the centaurs.... muahaha! More ways to off Odessa! BTW, Marcus isn\'t protecting his dragon-heritage secret very well - doesn\'t he tell women about it, to impress them? Okay, will wait for you to get off work so you can write more. THANK YOU for posting so regularly!!

Whew! Ch 25 - I just got caught up on 4 chapters and enjoyed every single one of them. Too bad the elves can\'t share her secret. And I wonder if Marcus will pull himself together and share Odessa\'s secrets. What did Severus mean when he said Marcus was changing? You really must update again tonight. I need to know!!

chap 25 - noooooo. cliffhanger! whyy!!! ms figg you are pure evil!!

on the other hand, i love the story. :)

ohhh no mione found odessa shine to severus .... please more i love it .... in till next time keep up the awesome work ..later for now

angel

OMG! Don\'t keep us in suspense!!!!!!!

Alright, you got me hooked! I find myself checking in every day to see if there is a new chapter or two up yet. You have a real gift for writing, your characters and plots seem so real that I forget about the writing altogether and just get in to the story. Thank you for the frequent updates.

wow, what will odessa do when she is in human form again, will she go to marcus to heal her? go to pomfrey or is she able to heal herself?

i love how quickly you update!! :D